History— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. For example, instead of 'very much nice cities a lot about the history,' say 'our teachers were very kind and taught us a lot about history.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I studied history during my school years, especially in the sixth standard when it was a major subject. Moreover, our teachers were very kind and taught us a lot about historical events.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and clearly, then add supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say 'I learned history at school, but I found it difficult and was not very interested. As a result, scoring good marks was challenging for me.'

Ejemplo: I learned history at school, but I found it difficult and was not very interested. As a result, scoring good marks was challenging for me.

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct and more coherent by using linking words and specific details. For example, say 'History is beneficial for the younger generation because it helps them understand past events. Without history books, young people would not learn about important incidents.'

Ejemplo: History is beneficial for the younger generation because it helps them understand past events. Without history books, young people would not learn about important incidents.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly, then support your opinion with reasons using linking words. Avoid grammatical mistakes and redundancy. For example, say 'I think learning history is important, especially for those who want to become journalists because it helps them understand past events. However, some students find it boring due to many dates and events.'

Ejemplo: I think learning history is important, especially for those who want to become journalists because it helps them understand past events. However, some students find it boring due to many dates and events.

× Yes, I studied history during my school time actually and during the six standard, it was a major subject to study history.

✓ Yes, I studied history during my school time actually and during the sixth standard, it was a major subject to study history.

The phrase 'six standard' is incorrect; it should be 'sixth standard' to correctly use the ordinal number in English. This is a common error when referring to grade levels.

× Moreover, our teachers are also very much nice cities a lot about the history.

✓ Moreover, our teachers were also very nice and taught a lot about history.

The original sentence has incorrect word usage: 'cities' is incorrect and 'very much nice' is not proper English. The correct adjective is 'nice' and 'very much' should be replaced with 'very' or omitted. Also, 'are' should be 'were' to match past tense context.

× I learned during my school time, but actually I'm not very much interested in history.

✓ I learned during my school time, but actually I'm not very interested in history.

The phrase 'very much interested' is awkward; the correct form is 'very interested'. Also, 'learned' is correct past tense here, but the sentence mixes past and present tenses appropriately.

× History was very difficult task for me and scoring good marks in the same subject was a very daunting task for me.

✓ History was a very difficult task for me and scoring good marks in the same subject was a very daunting task for me.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very difficult task'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article.

× History are beneficial for the younger generation because of there is no history book then how are modern youth learn about the past incidents or I think that history is much more important to learn.

✓ History is beneficial for the younger generation because if there is no history book, then how can modern youth learn about past incidents? I think that history is very important to learn.

'History' is singular and should be paired with 'is' not 'are'. Also, the sentence has multiple issues: 'there is no history book' needs 'if' instead of 'because of', and 'how are modern youth learn' is incorrect; it should be 'how can modern youth learn'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× It depends a person who wants to become a journalist.

✓ It depends on the person who wants to become a journalist.

The phrase 'depends a person' is incorrect; the correct form is 'depends on the person'. The preposition 'on' is necessary after 'depends'.

× History is very much crucial for the same person.

✓ History is very crucial for that person.

The phrase 'very much crucial' is incorrect; 'very crucial' is the correct form. Also, 'the same person' is better replaced with 'that person' for clarity.

× But for an ordinary students history was a boring subject becauses in it it includes many dates and events which may recur.

✓ But for ordinary students, history was a boring subject because it includes many dates and events which may recur.

'An ordinary students' is incorrect because 'students' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'an'. It should be 'ordinary students'. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Scoring very much difficult.

✓ Scoring was very difficult.

The original sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. 'Scoring very much difficult' is incorrect. The correct sentence is 'Scoring was very difficult' to express the idea properly.