Gifts— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và độ chính xác của câu; trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Chú ý thì động từ (have/good at) và lựa chọn từ (special occasions).

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at giving gifts, especially to close friends and relatives on special occasions. For example, I usually choose thoughtful presents like handmade cards or small keepsakes that reflect our relationship.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi phát âm/văn phạm và dùng cụm từ chính xác (e.g. "on special occasions"). Trả lời nên đầy đủ: nêu tần suất và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh từ sai như "chess" nếu ý muốn "such as" hoặc bị lỗi gõ.

Ejemplo: I don't give gifts very often; I usually do so on special occasions such as birthdays or holidays. For instance, I send presents to family members on Tet and to close friends on their birthdays.

Sugerencia: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng: nêu 2–3 tiêu chí cụ thể (giá, ý nghĩa, sở thích người nhận) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Sửa lỗi giới từ và động từ ("remember me", "for someone special"). Hạn chế tiếng ệm (umm).

Ejemplo: I consider several things, mainly the price, the recipient's tastes, and the personal meaning of the gift. For example, I prefer meaningful items that remind the person of our shared memories rather than expensive but impersonal gifts.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện thì động từ và cấu trúc điều kiện (use past tense correctly). Trả lời có cấu trúc: yes/no + brief reason + current situation. Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc và cụ thể hóa ví dụ (loại quà handmade, ví dụ cụ thể).

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. In the past I made handmade cards and small photo albums because I had more free time. Now, as I'm 18 and busy with work and studies, I usually buy gifts online instead.

Sugerencia: Làm rõ ý chính: có/không và lý do cụ thể. Tránh dịch sát tiếng Việt như "my appetite" nếu ý là "my preference". Dùng từ vựng chính xác như "personalized" và cấu trúc rõ ràng: "Sometimes... because...".

Ejemplo: Sometimes expensive gifts can show strong feelings, but I believe personalized or thoughtful gifts are more meaningful. I prefer presents that reflect the recipient's interests because they show I really know and care about them.

× Yes, I got at giving gifts especially for my close friends or my relatives in special cases. Uh.

✓ Yes, I'm good at giving gifts, especially to my close friends or relatives on special occasions.

The student used 'got at' instead of 'good at' and 'in special cases' instead of 'on special occasions'. Also 'my relatives' needs no extra 'my' repeated and prepositions need correction. Use 'I'm' (be verb) + adjective 'good at' + gerund 'giving'. Use 'to' for recipients and 'on' for occasions. Suggestions: replace 'got at' with 'good at', use 'to' for people, and 'on special occasions' for events.

× Not so often. I often give them gifts chess on special cases.

✓ Not so often. I often give them gifts, such as chocolates, on special occasions.

The original 'gifts chess' seems to be a spelling/word choice error; 'chess' is incorrect. 'On special cases' should be 'on special occasions'. Present participle form issues: use noun phrases correctly. Suggestion: use 'such as' to give examples and 'on special occasions' for timing.

× I consider their prices, umm their meaning when I give them for my special person because I think when they see their gift they will remember to me.

✓ I consider the price and meaning when I give a gift to someone special because I think when they see the gift they will remember me.

Pronoun errors: 'their prices' and 'their meaning' are vague; better to use 'the price and meaning'. 'Give them for my special person' is incorrect; use 'give a gift to someone special'. 'Remember to me' is wrong; correct is 'remember me'. Suggestions: use 'the' for specific aspects, 'give a gift to [someone]', and 'remember me' without 'to'.

× Of course, but when I were try I have more time to carefully choose and make them.

✓ Of course, but when I try, I have more time to carefully choose and make them.

The student used 'were' incorrectly with 'I'; correct is 'I try' (present simple) for habitual or conditional meaning. Subject-verb agreement: 'I were' is incorrect. Also punctuation: add commas. Suggestion: use 'when I try' or 'when I have time to try' depending on intended meaning.

× Now I am 18 so I'm busy with my work and my studies so I choose it online.

✓ Now I am 18, so I'm busy with work and my studies, so I choose gifts online.

Verb tense and wording: 'choose it online' is vague; specify 'choose gifts online'. Keep present simple for habitual action. Remove redundant 'my' before 'work'. Suggestion: use 'choose gifts online' to clarify what is chosen.

× Occasionally, but I express about the gifts based on my appetite and their personalized meaning it brings for me and remember people that gave me the gifts.

✓ Occasionally, but I judge gifts based on my preferences and the personalized meaning they have for me, and I remember the people who gave them to me.

Incorrect verb 'express about' should be 'judge' or 'decide', 'appetite' is wrong word for preference; use 'preferences'. 'Their personalized meaning it brings for me' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'the personalized meaning they have for me'. 'Remember people that gave me the gifts' needs relative pronoun 'who' and proper object order 'gave them to me'. Suggestion: use 'preferences', 'the meaning they have for me', and 'people who gave them to me'.