Stories— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cavabınızda daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələri daha qısa və aydın edin. Məsələn, keçmişdə baş verənləri danışarkən zaman formalarına diqqət yetirin və əlavə dəstəkləyici məlumatlar verin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved stories in my childhood. My grandma often read me stories before I went to sleep, and I found them very interesting. I especially enjoyed stories about little friends.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrin qrammatik quruluşuna diqqət yetirin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha məntiqli ifadə edin. Məsələn, "because" və "especially" kimi sözlərdən düzgün istifadə edin.

Ejemplo: I think both listening to and reading stories are useful, especially storybooks, because they improve your brain. However, I prefer reading stories because it allows me to feel the emotions more deeply than just listening.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Məsələn, keçmişdə baş verənləri danışarkən zaman formalarına diqqət yetirin və fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə edin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I wrote a story when I was a child, but only as homework, not in my free time. My teacher asked us to write an imaginary story, and I wrote about two sisters. I don't remember much, but it was interesting, and my teacher liked it.

Sugerencia: Fikirlərinizi daha aydın və təbii ifadə edin. Məsələn, "detective and psychologist" ifadəsini "detective and psychological stories" kimi düzgün terminlərlə əvəz edin və səbəbləri daha aydın izah edin.

Ejemplo: I like all kinds of stories, but I especially enjoy detective and psychological stories because they are interesting and engaging. However, I don't like historical stories very much because I often find them boring.

× Yes, I do, even in my childhood my grandma often read stories for me while I'm sleeping and I loved them very much 'cause it was very interesting.

✓ Yes, I do. Even in my childhood, my grandma often read stories to me while I was sleeping, and I loved them very much because they were very interesting.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm sleeping' with past events. The correct past continuous tense 'I was sleeping' should be used to match the past context. Also, 'read stories for me' should be 'read stories to me' for correct preposition usage.

× I loved also the little friend.

✓ I also loved the little friend.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'also' should be placed before the verb for natural English word order.

× Actually I think that both of them is useful for us, especially storybooks.

✓ Actually, I think that both of them are useful for us, especially storybooks.

The subject 'both of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Uh, improve your brain.

✓ They improve your brain.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement; adding 'They' clarifies the subject and completes the sentence.

× But I prefer reading them mostly because when you are reading you feel more than listening.

✓ But I mostly prefer reading them because when you are reading, you feel more than when listening.

The sentence is missing 'when' before 'listening' to parallel the structure and clarify meaning.

× You can live the same emotions them.

✓ You can live the same emotions as them.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'as' to correctly compare experiencing emotions.

× My teacher gave us a right unreal story when you're a child and I wrote about two sisters.

✓ My teacher gave us a fictional story when we were children, and I wrote about two sisters.

The phrase 'right unreal story' is awkward; 'fictional story' is more appropriate. Also, 'you're a child' should be 'we were children' to maintain past tense and correct pronoun usage.

× Actually I don't remember very much but it was interesting story and teacher liked.

✓ Actually, I don't remember very much, but it was an interesting story and the teacher liked it.

The sentence is missing articles 'an' before 'interesting story' and 'the' before 'teacher'. Also, 'teacher liked' needs an object 'it' to complete the meaning.

× Especially I like detective and psychologist.

✓ Especially, I like detective and psychological stories.

'Psychologist' is a noun referring to a person; the adjective 'psychological' should be used to describe stories.

× Stories are interesting and engaging for me, but I just don't like historical stories very much.

✓ Stories are interesting and engaging for me, but I just don't like historical stories very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I don't know, but when I'm reading them I feel boring.

✓ I don't know, but when I'm reading them, I feel bored.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom; 'bored' describes the feeling of the person. Here, 'bored' is correct to express the student's feeling.