Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise, use a clear topic sentence, add one specific example and a linking word. Avoid grammar errors (e.g., tense and word choice) and redundancy.

Ejemplo: I often visit entertainment websites to relax after work. For example, I read film reviews and watch short comedy clips on YouTube because they help me unwind quickly.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence naming the site, then give concise, specific reasons. Correct articles and plural forms, and link ideas with a conjunction or linking phrase.

Ejemplo: My favorite website is leonardoenglish.com because it offers audio recordings of short passages. I like it especially for the clear pronunciation of the speakers, which helps me improve my listening and speaking.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement about the change, then explain briefly and specifically why it mattered, using linking words. Fix unclear phrases and word choice (e.g., 'subtitles' and 'navigation'), and avoid fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. At first leonardoenglish.com had no subtitles, so I often gave up when I couldn't follow the lessons. Later they added subtitles and better navigation, which made the lessons much easier to understand and follow.

Sugerencia: Make a clear general statement about which websites are popular, then give specific examples and reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid vague phrases like 'some knowledge'.

Ejemplo: I think news and government websites are very popular in my country, especially those focused on national security. People visit them to read official updates and to learn about policies because security issues affect everyone's daily life.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference statement, then one or two clear reasons with linking words and a short comparison to books. Fix grammar and unnatural phrases (e.g., 'spreaded', '40th approach').

Ejemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and easier to search. In contrast, books take longer to update and are less convenient when I need immediate facts.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and then give specific purpose and features you would include, using smooth linking phrases. Remove fillers ('uh', 'well') and be concise about your goals.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would create a website to teach spoken English, focusing on pronunciation, intonation, and practical conversation lessons. It would include audio recordings and short practice exercises for learners to repeat.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence about what you learned, then give a specific example of how you practiced and the result, using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I improved my English pronunciation using leonardoenglish.com. I practiced aloud with its audio recordings every day, and as a result my speaking became clearer and my confidence increased.

× I often visit entertainment websites because after a day of hard work I need a way to relax myself and this Entertainment news read more relaxing.

✓ I often visit entertainment websites because after a day of hard work I need a way to relax, and this entertainment news reads as more relaxing.

The sentence has issues with word form and verb agreement. 'Relax myself' is unnatural; native speakers say 'relax'. 'Entertainment' should be lowercase. 'Read' is the wrong verb form; the intended meaning uses a linking verb, so use 'reads as' or 'is'. Also the subject 'news' is singular, so the verb should be 'reads'. Improve by using natural collocations: 'relax' and 'reads as relaxing' or 'is relaxing'.

× My favorite website is NW Leonardoenglish com.

✓ My favorite website is NW LeonardoEnglish.com.

This is primarily a formatting/name issue but also article/capitalization: website names are proper nouns and should be capitalized and punctuated correctly. Use the proper site name form 'LeonardoEnglish.com'. No definite or indefinite article is necessary here.

× This is a website for English study and there is a audio recording of these passages presented in this website and I like the pronunciation of this speakers.

✓ This is a website for studying English. There are audio recordings of the passages on this website, and I like the pronunciation of the speakers.

Multiple problems: 'English study' should be 'studying English' (gerund phrase). 'There is a audio' uses wrong article before vowel sound; use 'an' and 'recordings' should be plural to match 'passages'. 'Presented in this website' is awkward; use 'on this website'. 'This speakers' mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun; use 'the speakers'. Also break into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Yes, I often visit CW Leonardoenglish com Originally this art had no subtitles so I often give up when I could not understand the lessons.

✓ Yes, I often visited CW LeonardoEnglish.com. Originally this content had no subtitles, so I often gave up when I could not understand the lessons.

Pronoun/word choice and tense issues: 'art' is incorrect for 'content' or 'videos'. Maintain past tense 'visited' and 'gave up' when referring to past situations. Also site name capitalization and punctuation needed. Use commas to separate clauses.

× But later the website added subtitles in the clearance guidelines in the clearance navigation so.

✓ But later the website added subtitles in the settings under the playback or navigation options.

'In the clearance guidelines in the clearance navigation' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use precise prepositions and nouns: 'in the settings' or 'under the playback/navigation options'. Remove the trailing 'so' or complete the clause.

× I suppose the most popular websites in my country is the ones that are related to the national security cause.

✓ I suppose the most popular websites in my country are those that are related to national security.

Subject-verb agreement and number: 'websites' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. 'the ones' should be 'those' for clarity; 'national security cause' is awkward—use 'national security'.

× In this more globalized world, national security is more and more vital to 1's country.

✓ In this more globalized world, national security is increasingly vital to one's country.

The numeral '1' is incorrect for the pronoun 'one's'. Use 'increasingly' instead of 'more and more' for naturalness. Maintain correct possessive pronoun form.

× So when people are scanning information in this website, they can learn about some knowledge.

✓ So when people browse information on these websites, they can learn new things.

'Scanning information in this website' uses wrong verb and preposition. Use 'browse' or 'scan' and the preposition 'on' for websites. 'Learn about some knowledge' is unnatural; use 'learn new things' or 'gain knowledge'.

× Personally I prefer getting information from websites cause nowadays they are the fastest.

✓ Personally, I prefer getting information from websites because nowadays they are the fastest.

'Cause' is informal and should be written as 'because' in formal responses. Add a comma after introductory adverb 'Personally'.

× The 40th approach to spreading information or in contrast books are much slower than spreaded by websites.

✓ The approach to spreading information online is much faster, whereas books are much slower than websites.

This sentence is unclear and contains errors: '40th' is meaningless here; remove it. 'Spreaded' is wrong past participle; use 'spread' or rephrase. Use 'whereas' for contrast and ensure parallel structure.

× Yes, if I had the chance, I would develop my own website showing how to learn English, especially spoken English.

✓ Yes, if I had the chance, I would develop my own website showing how to learn English, especially spoken English.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It correctly uses the conditional modal 'would' for a hypothetical present situation, so no change is necessary.

× Well, 'cause I'm obsessed with, uh, the English pronunciation, intonation and content.

✓ Well, because I'm obsessed with English pronunciation, intonation, and content.

Avoid colloquial ' 'cause' and filler 'uh' in formal speech. Remove 'the' before 'English pronunciation' unless specifying particular pronunciation. Use commas to separate list items.

× I learned the pronunciation of English from the leonardoenglish.com which is a very useful English studying tool and in this website I practiced the spoken English well every day and gradually my spoken English, especially pronunciation.

✓ I learned English pronunciation from LeonardoEnglish.com, which is a very useful tool for learning English. On this website, I practiced spoken English every day, and gradually my spoken English, especially my pronunciation, improved.

Run-on sentence with awkward phrasing: 'English studying tool' should be 'tool for learning English'. Use commas to set off the relative clause. 'In this website' should be 'on this website'. Add the verb 'improved' to complete the final clause. Make pronoun reference clear by adding 'my' before 'pronunciation'.