Friends— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I known' nên là 'I have known'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ như 'my my'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known for eight years. She is my neighbor, but now she is studying in Australia. Although we haven't met for a long time, I hope she is doing well.

Sugerencia: Cần chú ý thì động từ (was -> were), tránh lặp từ như 'ride a bike ride'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động hiện tại hoặc cảm xúc.

Ejemplo: When we were children, we usually rode bikes around the neighborhood and played with dolls together. Those were memorable times for me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần dùng thì đúng (meet -> met, going -> went), tránh dùng từ thừa như 'umm'. Nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: If I remember correctly, the last time we met was about three years ago before she went to Australia to study. Since then, we haven't had the chance to meet.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi phát âm và chính tả như 'laser time' thành 'leisure time'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: It depends on my leisure time. If I have enough free time, I usually hang out with my friends, go to cafes, or take photos. Otherwise, I spend time with my family.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nên dùng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ như 'umm'. Câu nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Nên thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời phong phú.

Ejemplo: Friends are very important to me because I can share my feelings with them when I am happy or sad. They understand me and support me, which makes my life better.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Nên thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood. When I feel happy, I prefer to spend time with a group of friends. However, if I feel sad, I like to talk with just one close friend.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần dùng thì đúng và cấu trúc chính xác như 'we can cooking' nên là 'we can cook'. Câu nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. Sometimes I invite my friends to my home so we can cook and eat together instead of going out, which requires a lot of preparation.

× I known her for eight years and she's my my neighborhood friend and now she's a study in Australia and for a long time we not meet each others and I hope she's live pretty good. Good.

✓ I have known her for eight years and she's my neighborhood friend. Now she's studying in Australia and for a long time we have not met each other. I hope she is living pretty well.

The verb 'known' should be in the present perfect tense 'have known' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. 'She's a study' is incorrect; it should be 'she's studying' to show ongoing action. 'We not meet' should be 'we have not met' to correctly use the present perfect negative. 'Each others' should be 'each other' as 'each other' is reciprocal pronoun and does not take plural form. 'She's live' should be 'she is living' to use the correct present continuous tense. 'Pretty good' should be 'pretty well' because 'well' is the correct adverb to describe how someone lives.

× When we was a child, we usually ride a bike ride around the neighborhood and we play the doll with each others and I feel that the memorable time for me.

✓ When we were children, we usually rode bikes around the neighborhood and played with dolls with each other. I feel that was a memorable time for me.

'Was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. 'Ride a bike ride' is redundant; it should be 'rode bikes'. 'Play the doll' should be 'played with dolls'. 'Each others' should be 'each other'. 'I feel that the memorable time' should be 'I feel that was a memorable time' to complete the sentence properly.

× Umm if I'm not mistaken I think the last time we meet each other often is umm 3 years ago before she going to Australia to study.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, I think the last time we met each other often was about 3 years ago before she went to Australia to study.

'Meet' should be 'met' to indicate past tense. 'Is' should be 'was' to agree with the past time reference. 'She going' should be 'she went' to use the past tense.

× So from now we don't have opportunity to meet each other.

✓ So from now on, we don't have the opportunity to meet each other.

'From now' should be 'from now on' to indicate starting from the present into the future. 'Opportunity' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific opportunity.

× If I have umm, much laser time, I will hang out with my friend to go to cafe or take a photos.

✓ If I have much leisure time, I will hang out with my friend, go to a cafe, or take photos.

'Laser time' is incorrect; it should be 'leisure time'. 'Go to cafe' needs the article 'a' before 'cafe'. 'Take a photos' is incorrect; 'photos' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× But if I don't have much later time, I will spend time to my family.

✓ But if I don't have much leisure time, I will spend time with my family.

'Later time' is incorrect; it should be 'leisure time'. 'Spend time to my family' should be 'spend time with my family' because 'spend time with' is the correct collocation.

× So yes, it's all my answer.

✓ So yes, that's all my answer.

'It's all my answer' is awkward; 'that's all my answer' or 'that's all for my answer' is more natural. However, this is more of a phrase usage issue than a strict grammar error.

× That is very important for me because when I feel sad or I feel happy, I can share with them and they can umm like understand for me and they will umm share for me too.

✓ That is very important to me because when I feel sad or happy, I can share with them and they can understand me and they will share with me too.

'Important for me' should be 'important to me'. 'Understand for me' should be 'understand me'. 'Share for me' should be 'share with me'.

× So I think friends is very important for me and for my life.

✓ So I think friends are very important to me and to my life.

'Friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'important for me' should be 'important to me'.

× I think it depends on my feeling and my emotion at that time.

✓ I think it depends on my feelings and my emotions at that time.

'Feeling' and 'emotion' should be plural to refer to general states.

× If I feel happy and want to meet all my friends, I will prefer to spend time for a group of friends.

✓ If I feel happy and want to meet all my friends, I will prefer to spend time with a group of friends.

'Spend time for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' when referring to spending time with people.

× But when I feel like feel sad or feel bad and want to share for just one my best friends I've I will.

✓ But when I feel sad or bad and want to share, I will just with one of my best friends.

The sentence is awkward and contains errors. 'Feel like feel sad' is incorrect; it should be 'feel sad'. 'Share for' should be 'share with'. 'Just one my best friends I've I will' is ungrammatical; it should be 'just with one of my best friends'.

× Yes, of course, sometimes I suggest to my friends to come to my home and we can cooking and eating together instead of hang out and have to prepare much.

✓ Yes, of course, sometimes I suggest to my friends that they come to my home and we can cook and eat together instead of hanging out and having to prepare a lot.

'Suggest to my friends to come' should be 'suggest to my friends that they come'. 'We can cooking and eating' should be 'we can cook and eat'. 'Instead of hang out' should be 'instead of hanging out'. 'Have to prepare much' should be 'having to prepare a lot'.