Friends— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details logically. For example, avoid repeating phrases like 'know her' and use correct verb tenses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since childhood. We studied together in school and later attended the same college, so we've been close for many years.

Sugerencia: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about activities. For example, mention the sports clearly and avoid repeating words.

Ejemplo: I usually do various activities with my friends, especially when we meet. For instance, we often go to the park to play sports like football or tennis, which are our favourite pastimes.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words. Be specific about the location and activities.

Ejemplo: We often meet at the park near my house since she lives just a stone's throw away. In the evenings, we play football there to stay active and have fun together.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Make your answer more fluent and structured by starting with a clear statement and adding specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, whenever I have free time, I go out with my friends to watch movies or play outdoor sports. I really enjoy their company and look forward to spending time with them.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Clearly express your feelings about friends and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Friends are a very important part of my life because I share a strong bond with them. When I'm with them, I always have fun and feel refreshed.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more coherent by using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your reasons for preferring one friend.

Ejemplo: I prefer spending time with one friend, especially my best friend whom I've known since childhood. We studied together in school and college, and spending time with her helps me relieve stress.

Sugerencia: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of occasions when you invite friends.

Ejemplo: Yes, I invite my friends to my home on special occasions like birthday parties and festivals such as Diwali. We create memories together, and I also like to give them gifts.

× Yes I have a friend and I know her know her since my childhood because we did study together and after that we off to college and even our colleges were same so we know her from long time ago.

✓ Yes, I have a friend and I have known her since my childhood because we studied together and after that we went to college and even our colleges were the same, so we have known each other for a long time.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'know her' and uses wrong verb tenses and forms. 'Know her' should be 'have known her' to indicate a continuous state from past to present (present perfect). 'Did study' is unnecessary; simple past 'studied' is correct. 'We off to college' is incorrect; it should be 'we went to college'. 'Our colleges were same' needs the definite article 'the' before 'same'. 'We know her from long time ago' should be 'we have known each other for a long time' to correctly express duration and mutual relationship.

× I usually do different kind of activities with my friends whenever we are together, especially when we are together.

✓ I usually do different kinds of activities with my friends whenever we are together, especially when we are together.

The phrase 'different kind of activities' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of activities' because 'different' implies multiple types, requiring plural 'kinds'.

× We used to go outside in the park and then we try to play play any sport like football or tennis.

✓ We used to go outside to the park and then we tried to play any sport like football or tennis.

The phrase 'try to play play' has a repeated word and incorrect tense. Since 'used to' indicates past habitual action, the following verb should be in past tense 'tried'. Also, 'go outside in the park' is better as 'go outside to the park' to indicate direction.

× So that's our favorite activities which we like like out.

✓ So those are our favorite activities which we like to do.

'That's' is singular but refers to plural 'activities', so it should be 'those are'. The phrase 'which we like like out' is unclear and redundant; 'which we like to do' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× She lives leaves a stone throw away from my house and she's very helpful.

✓ She lives a stone's throw away from my house and she's very helpful.

The phrase 'lives leaves' is incorrect; only 'lives' is needed. Also, the idiom is 'a stone's throw away', requiring possessive form 'stone's'.

× For example, in the evening time when we are free, we try to go to the park so that we can enjoy enjoy the football and it also stay as active and we have fun together.

✓ For example, in the evening when we are free, we try to go to the park so that we can enjoy playing football; it also helps us stay active and we have fun together.

The phrase 'enjoy enjoy the football' repeats 'enjoy' and is awkward; 'enjoy playing football' is correct. 'It also stay as active' is incorrect; it should be 'it also helps us stay active' to express the effect properly.

× Yes, whenever I have a time, so I go out with my friends for a movie for a uh, for any outdoor sport, uh, which I like it.

✓ Yes, whenever I have time, I go out with my friends for a movie or for any outdoor sport that I like.

'A time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here and should not have an article. The phrase 'which I like it' is redundant; 'that I like' suffices.

× So I, I really like it whenever I am with them, I really like their company.

✓ So, I really like it whenever I am with them; I really enjoy their company.

The sentence is repetitive with 'I really like it' and 'I really like their company'. Using 'enjoy' for 'their company' is more natural and avoids repetition.

× Friends are very important part in my life because I share.

✓ Friends are a very important part of my life because I share a great bond with them.

The phrase 'important part in my life' should be 'important part of my life'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'a great bond with them' completes the thought.

× I share great bond with them and as well as when I am I am with them I always have fun and it also refreshing me whenever I I'm with them it also feel very.

✓ I share a great bond with them, and whenever I am with them, I always have fun; it also refreshes me and makes me feel very good.

The sentence has repeated words and incomplete thoughts. 'Refreshing me' should be 'refreshes me' (verb form). 'It also feel very' is incomplete; adding 'makes me feel very good' completes the meaning.

× I like to spend time with one of my friend because she is my best friend and I know her since my childhood.

✓ I like to spend time with one of my friends because she is my best friend and I have known her since my childhood.

'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'one of' requires plural noun. 'I know her since' should be 'I have known her since' to indicate duration from past to present.

× For example, we did study together and as well as we were together in the college life.

✓ For example, we studied together and we were together during college life.

'Did study' is unnecessary; simple past 'studied' is correct. 'In the college life' is better as 'during college life' for natural phrasing.

× So definitely that's why I tried to spend time with them and it is also stress Buster activity for me because.

✓ So definitely that's why I try to spend time with her, and it is also a stress-buster activity for me.

'Tried' implies past, but context suggests present habit, so 'try' is better. 'Them' should be 'her' to match singular 'one of my friends'. 'Stress Buster' should be hyphenated as 'stress-buster'. The sentence was incomplete; completed for clarity.

× Yes, on my birthday parties as well as on any other occasion, I especially invite them to my home so that we can create the memories as well as I try to give them gifts.

✓ Yes, on my birthday parties as well as on any other occasion, I especially invite them to my home so that we can create memories, and I try to give them gifts.

'Create the memories' should be 'create memories' as 'memories' is general here. The sentence was run-on; adding 'and' improves clarity.