Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct some grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers like “uh” and repetition. Also use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., “cast” → “cast as” or “featured”).

Ejemplo: Yes. One advertisement for Tide washing powder impressed me as a child. It featured a young child who naturally demonstrated how well the powder cleaned clothes, and the visuals clearly showed stained shirts becoming bright. Because the ad was simple and convincing, I remembered it for years.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific examples with correct grammar. Use linking words to clarify contrast (e.g., “however,” “instead”). Replace vague phrases with precise ones (e.g., “on public transport” rather than “on the transportation”).

Ejemplo: Not really. I don’t see many ads on public transport in my city; instead, most ads I notice are on billboards or in supermarkets, often for food or kitchenware. However, trains occasionally carry posters for travel companies or local events.

Sugerencia: Make your opinion clear and support it with one or two reasons. Remove hesitations and correct phrasing (e.g., “I don’t like advertisements” not “I do not like it advertisements”). Use linking words like “because” and “although.”

Ejemplo: Honestly, I don’t like most advertisements because they interrupt videos and are often repetitive. Although some ads for useful household products catch my attention, I usually skip them when possible.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and add a specific example and reason. Use precise vocabulary (“household items” or “tableware”) and a linking word to explain why you like them.

Ejemplo: I prefer advertisements for household items because they often introduce useful products. For example, an ad for a new non-stick pan showed features that made cooking easier, so I felt it was worth trying.

Sugerencia: Be specific and concise. Use correct tense and plural forms (e.g., “I sometimes see ads,” “YouTube videos”). Use linking words to add detail (e.g., “especially on,” “for example”). Avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer, especially on YouTube and social media. For example, while watching YouTube videos I frequently encounter short brand ads before the main clip, and social apps show sponsored posts between content.

× Yes, there was an advertisement that made a very good impression on me when I was a child.

✓ Yes, there was an advertisement that made a very strong impression on me when I was a child.

The sentence is understandable but 'very good impression' is unnatural collocation; 'very strong impression' or 'a good impression' are correct. This is a sentence structure/style issue: choose a natural adjective-noun collocation. Use 'strong impression' to convey impact clearly.

× the advertisement was about a tide washer, uh, washer powder and, and that a small child was casted to show the benefits of the tide.

✓ The advertisement was about Tide washing powder, and a small child was cast to show Tide's benefits.

Incorrect past participle/form: 'casted' is wrong; the past participle and simple past of 'cast' is 'cast'. Also adjust word order and capitalization for proper noun 'Tide' and use possessive 'Tide's benefits' for clarity.

× And he acted in such a great way that it looked all natural and he demonstrated the benefits of tide in a very good way.

✓ He acted naturally and demonstrated Tide's benefits very effectively.

The original mixes awkward phrases and redundancy. Use past tense 'acted' and 'demonstrated' correctly and replace 'in a very good way' with 'very effectively' for concise, natural expression. Capitalize brand 'Tide' and use possessive.

× No, there are very few advertisements that I see on the transportation.

✓ No, there are very few advertisements that I see on transportation.

'The transportation' is unnecessary; use uncountable 'transportation' without 'the' in this context. This is a singular/plural/usage related error affecting noun phrase choice.

× I see most of the advertisement of products related to eating and utensils are other things, but for trains and other transport they are very less advertisements.

✓ Most of the advertisements I see are for food, utensils, and similar products, but there are very few advertisements on trains and other transport.

Multiple issues: 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'; 'eating' should be 'food'; 'very less advertisements' is incorrect—use 'very few advertisements'. Reorder sentence for clarity.

× Umm, honestly I do not like it advertisements, especially if I am watching a video and in that an advertisement appears.

✓ Honestly, I do not like advertisements, especially when I am watching a video and an advertisement appears.

Incorrect pronoun 'it advertisements' should be simply 'advertisements'. Use 'when' to refer to a time clause rather than 'if' for habitual occurrences. Remove extraneous words for fluency.

× Although there are few advertisements that are quite eye-catching especially which are related to umm useful products like kitchen or uh, any other E table items.

✓ There are a few eye-catching advertisements, especially those for useful products like kitchen and other household items.

Sentence is long and ungrammatical. Use 'a few' or 'some' and replace 'which are related to' with 'those for'. 'E table' seems erroneous—replace with 'household'. Reorder for clarity and correct relative clause usage.

× I like advertisement related to a table items or household products because I find them useful and sometimes advertisements show a new product that can be really valuable and we don't know about that product.

✓ I like advertisements related to household items because I find them useful, and sometimes advertisements show new products that can be really valuable and that we did not know about.

Use plural 'advertisements' and 'items' rather than singular mismatches. 'A table items' is incorrect; change to 'household items'. For tense consistency, 'did not know' or 'we did not know about' fits past reference. Improve punctuation and flow.

× Yes, while I am using my mobile phone or computer I sometime see advertisement specially if I am using a YouTube channels or any social media umm they are most uh brand advertisements that promote their brand and the ads are very uh frequent and YouTube's while playing a video.

✓ Yes, while I am using my mobile phone or computer I sometimes see advertisements, especially when I use YouTube or social media; most of these are brand advertisements that promote their products, and the ads are very frequent on YouTube while playing a video.

Multiple present-tense and agreement errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'advertisement' plural; 'a YouTube channels' wrong—use 'YouTube' or 'YouTube channels'; 'they are most brand advertisements' rephrase to 'most of these are brand advertisements'; avoid possessive 'YouTube's' in this context. Ensure consistent present tense and subject-verb agreement.