Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, use correct grammar, and give specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and keep sentences concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes. One advertisement that impressed me when I was a child featured the boy band Big Bang. Because I admired them, I wanted the mobile phones and clothes they promoted. As a result, I tried to save money to buy similar items.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. State which transport you use, then describe where ads appear with specific examples and linking words. Correct vocabulary: 'on buses', 'announcements', 'bus stops'. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Ejemplo: It depends, but I usually travel by bus, so I see and hear many advertisements there. For example, buses often have posters inside, and radio announcements tell passengers about local shops and upcoming events.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion and explain why with specific reasons. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'interested in cosmetics', 'not interested in food ads'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to structure the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like some advertisements, but it depends on the product. For example, I enjoy ads for cosmetics and fashionable gadgets because they show trends and useful features, however I usually ignore food advertisements.

Sugerencia: Repeat less and be specific about what you like and why. Use correct noun forms (e.g., 'cosmetics', 'fashion adverts') and linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Keep answer to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer advertisements for cosmetics and fashion because they highlight the latest trends and show how products look in real life. For example, beauty ads often demonstrate makeup techniques that I find helpful.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and correct verbs (e.g., 'see ads', 'use my phone'). Say where and how often you see ads, and give a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer because I watch videos on YouTube. For example, video ads usually play before or during the clips I watch, and banner ads appear on websites I visit.

× Teresa, few advertisements that make impression on me because of at that time I really like the boy band's name is Big Bang.

✓ Teresa, a few advertisements made an impression on me because at that time I really liked a boy band called Big Bang.

Use 'a few' (countable plural) and plural 'advertisements' with past tense 'made' to match 'at that time'. 'Boy band' is countable and name should follow 'called'. Suggestion: use 'a few' for several, past tense 'liked', and 'called' to introduce names.

× They usually own the advertisements such as a mobile phone or kind of clothes or square uniform.

✓ They usually endorsed advertisements for things such as mobile phones, clothing, or school uniforms.

The verb 'own' is incorrect here; 'endorse' or 'appear in' is appropriate. Also correct pluralization ('mobile phones'), use of categories ('clothing'), and 'school uniforms' instead of 'square uniform'. Suggestion: choose verbs matching context and ensure nouns are plural or categorical.

× So I really want to buy those product.

✓ So I really wanted to buy those products.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'those'. Also past tense 'wanted' fits the childhood context. Suggestion: match demonstratives ('those') with plural nouns and keep tense consistent.

× I think it depends on the transport, but I think I most usual I usually use the bus the most.

✓ I think it depends on the transport, but usually I use the bus the most.

Redundant words 'I think' repeated and awkward phrase 'most usual I usually' should be simplified to 'usually I use the bus the most.' Suggestion: remove redundancy and keep adverb placement natural (usually before verb).

× So I I heard a lot of the advertising through the radio because when they say about the next top bus stop, they usually talk about on edge.

✓ So I hear a lot of advertisements on the radio because when they announce the next stop, they usually mention ads or promotions.

'Heard' vs 'hear' depends on present habit; use present 'hear'. 'Advertising' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'On the radio' is correct preposition. 'Say about the next top bus stop' should be 'announce the next stop'. 'Talk about on edge' is unclear; replace with 'mention ads or promotions.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on the radio') and verbs ('announce') and clarify meaning.

× I'd like advertisement, but it depends on the product, I think, because I'm really interested the cosmetic and cool things, but I'm not interesting kind of food or yeah, food company.

✓ I'd like advertisements, but it depends on the product, I think, because I'm really interested in cosmetics and cool things, but I'm not interested in food or food companies.

Use plural 'advertisements'. 'Interested' requires 'in' before the object. 'Cosmetic' should be 'cosmetics' (noun) and 'I'm not interesting' should be 'I'm not interested'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions with 'interested' and plural nouns where appropriate.

× So I really interested in watching advertise kind of that.

✓ So I'm really interested in watching that kind of advertisement.

'Interested' needs 'be' + adjective: 'I'm really interested'. 'Watching advertise' is wrong; use noun 'advertisement' or gerund 'watching advertisements'. Word order corrected to 'that kind of advertisement.' Suggestion: use 'interested in' + noun or gerund.

× Of course, I often sell advertisement when I own both my phone or computer because I usually watch it on YouTube on my phone or computer, but usually they show me a lot of the advertisement during the the watching videos.

✓ Of course, I often see advertisements when I use either my phone or computer because I usually watch YouTube on them, and they show me a lot of advertisements during the videos.

'Sell advertisement' is incorrect; should be 'see advertisements'. 'Own' is unnecessary; use 'use' or 'have'. 'Either' fits choice 'phone or computer'. 'Watch it on YouTube' -> 'watch YouTube'; remove duplicate 'the' and use plural 'advertisements'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for observing ads ('see'), correct prepositions ('on YouTube'), and parallel structures ('phone or computer').