Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details (which ad, what made it memorable). Use correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and linking words to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. A soup commercial from a popular local brand impressed me as a child because it had a catchy jingle and colorful animation. The jingle was easy to remember, so my family and I would hum it at home. Because the ad was on TV a lot, the brand became very familiar to everyone.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Use one clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then give a specific example (which transport, what ads). Correct grammar (country/countries, singular/plural) and use a linking word to add detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport because buses and taxis are widely used here. For example, many buses display ads for household products, mobile services and local stores, so passengers see them every day.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons and examples. Avoid vague phrasing and redundant words. Use linking words (but, however, because) and limit to 2–3 supporting sentences.

Ejemplo: I generally do not like most advertisements because they are often intrusive. However, I appreciate ads that are relevant to my interests, such as those promoting local events or clothing sales, because they help me discover leisure activities and good bargains.

Sugerencia: State the types of ads you like clearly, then explain why with a specific reason and one example of how you use them. Remove repetitions and filler words; keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer advertisements for clothing and makeup because they show new styles and product reviews. For instance, when I see a makeup ad on social media, I often click it to compare prices and read customer feedback before buying.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and concisely: start with 'Yes' or 'No' then give a specific reason and example of platforms and ad types. Remove fillers and repeated words. Use one or two supporting sentences with linking words (for example, because, such as).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone because I use social media frequently. For example, Facebook and Instagram show sponsored posts and video ads for clothing, apps and local services while I scroll.

× When I was a child, some soups brand was very popular in our country because they had very attractive advertisement and also our countries many daily products import from the other countries.

✓ When I was a child, a soup brand was very popular in our country because it had very attractive advertisements, and many of our country's daily products were imported from other countries.

Errors: 'some soups brand' mixes plural and singular; use 'a soup brand' or 'some soup brands'. 'was' agrees with singular 'brand'. 'they had' should be 'it had' for singular. 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. 'our countries many daily products import from the other countries' is incorrect word order, missing passive 'were imported' and possessive 'our country's'. Suggestion: ensure subject and noun numbers match, use correct verb agreement, pluralize countable nouns, and use passive for imported goods.

× Umm, in my countries, uh, most popular transportation transportations are taxi and bus. That's why many bus have a lot of advertisements such as umm, daily goods, products, umm.

✓ Umm, in my country, the most popular modes of transportation are taxis and buses. That's why many buses have a lot of advertisements for daily goods and products.

Errors: 'in my countries' should be singular 'in my country'. 'transportation transportations' is redundant; use 'modes of transportation' or 'means of transport'. 'taxi and bus' should be plural 'taxis and buses' when speaking generally. 'many bus have' requires plural 'buses' and correct verb 'have'. Use preposition 'for' to indicate what the advertisements are advertising. Suggestion: use singular/plural correctly and proper prepositions like 'in', 'for'.

× Actually I don't like advertisements, but some advertisements are really neat to me because sometimes I need to search some leisure activities that and also find some clothes that time I usually see.

✓ Actually, I don't like advertisements, but some are really useful to me because sometimes I need to search for leisure activities and to find clothes that I usually see then.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'neat to me' should be 'useful to me'. 'search some leisure activities' requires 'search for leisure activities'. 'that and also find some clothes that time I usually see' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'and to find clothes that I usually see then'. Suggestion: use correct verb patterns (search for), choose appropriate adjectives, and restructure sentences for clarity.

× Uh, I like, uh, clothes, clothes advertising and of course makeup, makeup products advertisement. Those are really needed for me sometime. That's why I usually search from the online of those type of advertisement.

✓ Uh, I like clothing advertisements and, of course, makeup product advertisements. Those are sometimes really useful for me. That's why I usually search online for those types of advertisements.

Errors: repetition 'clothes, clothes advertising' is redundant; use 'clothing advertisements'. 'makeup products advertisement' should be pluralized 'makeup product advertisements' or 'makeup advertisements'. 'needed for me sometime' is wrong — use 'sometimes really useful for me'. 'search from the online of those type of advertisement' is incorrect preposition and agreement; use 'search online for those types of advertisements'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms (clothing), pluralize nouns, and use 'search for' with 'online'.

× Umm, I often see advertisements, uh, on my phone because, umm, I usually use, uh, Facebook, So social media accounts such as Facebook, uh, Facebook, Facebooks have a lot of, umm, many variety of advertisements such as.

✓ Umm, I often see advertisements on my phone because I usually use social media, such as Facebook. Facebook has a wide variety of advertisements.

Errors: 'So social media accounts such as Facebook' is disfluent and 'Facebooks' is incorrect plural; proper noun stays singular when referring to the platform. 'many variety' is ungrammatical; use 'a wide variety'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, avoid unnecessary fillers, and use correct noun number for proper nouns and count expressions like 'a variety of'.