Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details about the ad (what happened, why it impressed you). Avoid filler phrases like “you know” and vague endings like “etcetera.” Use a linking phrase to connect idea and reason.

Ejemplo: Yes. A toy commercial for My Little Pony impressed me when I was a child. It showed colorful characters and a short story about friendship, which made me remember the ad for years because it felt emotional and fun.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer, then explain briefly with a clear reason and an example. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., “on buses” not “on bus”). If you mention listening to ads, clarify where and give a short supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don't see many ads on trains or buses where I live, but I hear commercial messages on the transport radio and announcements, especially during rush hour.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then provide one or two specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Improve grammar and word order (e.g., “It depends on the advertisement”). Use linking words like “because” or “however.”

Ejemplo: It depends on the advertisement. I dislike intrusive, repetitive ads because they are annoying, but I enjoy creative or informative ones that teach me something useful.

Sugerencia: Good structure and detail. Improve word choice and clarity: replace “without fully instructive” with clearer phrasing like “without being pushy” and use singular/plural agreement (e.g., “documentary-style”). Add one brief linking phrase to tighten coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer subtle, informative ads, such as short documentary-style pieces or native content, because they provide useful information without being pushy. For example, I often watch travel ads that showcase destinations and give practical tips, which helps me choose where to go.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer and avoid casual fillers like “Sure.” Correct phrasing: “I often see advertisements on my phone or computer.” Clarify what you mean by “They go like a spam” (e.g., “they feel like spam” or “they are repetitive”). Add a short reason why you don't mind them.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer, but I usually don't mind them because most are targeted and not too disruptive. However, some feel like spam because they are repetitive or irrelevant.

× Sure it is. When I was a child, I used to watch this advertisement about toys, you know, especially one with the My Little Pony toys and etcetera.

✓ Sure. When I was a child, I used to watch an advertisement about toys, especially one featuring My Little Pony.

The main issues are article and phrasing. 'This advertisement' is okay but 'an advertisement' fits better with 'one' and general reference; 'one with the My Little Pony toys and etcetera' is awkward. Use 'featuring My Little Pony' to express that the ad included those toys. 'And etcetera' is redundant because etcetera already implies continuation. Also removed unnecessary filler 'you know'. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Usually I don't see a lot of advertising on trains or on bus, but I listen to them through the radio.

✓ Usually I don't see a lot of advertising on trains or buses, but I hear it on the radio.

Use the plural 'buses' for general reference (or 'on a bus'). 'Listen to them through the radio' is incorrect for advertisements; ads are 'heard' and 'on the radio' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also 'them' (plural) can be replaced with 'it' referring to 'advertising' as an uncountable noun. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Usually it depends on advertisement itself, because some of them are annoying and other ones can be interesting indeed.

✓ Usually it depends on the advertisement itself, because some ads are annoying and others can be interesting.

Missing article: use 'the advertisement' or 'an advertisement' when referring specifically; 'advertisement itself' needs 'the'. 'Some of them' is wordy; 'some ads' is clearer. Use 'others' instead of 'other ones'. 'Indeed' is unnecessary and sounds formal; remove for natural speech. This fixes article and quantifier usage. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I prefer subtle informative advertising such as short documentary style ads or native content because they provide useful information without fully instructive.

✓ I prefer subtly informative advertising, such as short documentary-style ads or native content, because they provide useful information without being fully instructive.

'Subtle informative' should be 'subtly informative' (adverb modifying 'informative') or 'subtly informative advertising' (compound). 'Documentary style' should be hyphenated as 'documentary-style' when used as a compound adjective. 'Without fully instructive' is ungrammatical; use 'without being fully instructive' to include the verb 'be'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, I often engage with travel ads that showcase destination and practical tips, which helps me make better choices.

✓ For example, I often engage with travel ads that showcase destinations and practical tips, which help me make better choices.

'Destination' should be plural 'destinations' to match 'ads' and 'practical tips'. Also 'which helps me' is incorrect because the relative clause refers to 'ads that showcase destinations and practical tips' (plural), so use 'help' instead of 'helps'. This fixes number agreement. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Sure, I do often see the advertisements when I'm on my phone or computer, but I usually don't mind them.

✓ Sure, I often see advertisements when I'm on my phone or computer, but I usually don't mind them.

'Do often see' is grammatically possible but awkward; native speakers prefer 'often see'. 'The advertisements' is unnecessarily specific; 'advertisements' is more natural in this context. No preposition error remains after correction; original minor wording awkwardness adjusted. Grammar problem type ID:11

× They go like a spam.

✓ They come across like spam.

'Go like a spam' is ungrammatical. Use 'come across like spam' or 'feel like spam' to express that ads resemble spam. 'Spam' is uncountable here, so omit the article 'a'. This corrects word choice and adjective/adverb usage. Grammar problem type ID:13