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Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、语法更准确，并避免重复。起始用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用一到两句补充具体细节（例如广告内容、你当时的感受和为什么印象深刻），使用连接词使句子更连贯。注意动词时态和句子结构（例如“a woman was being chased by a tiger”而不是重复“chased”）。

Ejemplo: Yes. One advertisement that really stuck with me was for cough medicine. It showed a woman being chased by a fierce tiger, which frightened me as a child because the scenes were so realistic and loud.

Sugerencia: 回答需要更清晰和准确。先直接回答“是”或“否”，然后用一到两句说明在哪些交通工具上看到广告以及广告形式（海报、广播、视频等）。避免不明晰的表达（例如“around my hair”不合适），用具体词汇如“frequently”或“repeatedly”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. There are posters on trains and buses, and audio commercials are often played over the speakers repeatedly.

Sugerencia: 回答要更简洁并提供明确理由。先给出直接回答，然后用一两句具体解释为什么不喜欢，比如打断剧情或广告太长。避免含糊或语病（例如“emergency characters comes to a consequence”不通顺）。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like them, especially when they interrupt TV shows at crucial moments. It breaks the mood and makes the viewing experience frustrating.

Sugerencia: 回答要更明确并给出具体例子。先说明喜欢哪类广告（例如有名人代言、搞笑或实用的广告），然后解释为什么喜欢并举一两个例子。避免含糊词汇和填充词（如“uh”）。

Ejemplo: I prefer ads that feature my favorite celebrities because I'm curious to see how they present products. For example, when a well-known actress endorses a skincare brand, I pay more attention to the ad.

Sugerencia: 回答要更结构化并减少不必要细节。先直接回答频率（经常/有时/很少），然后解释在哪些应用或网站看到广告及其形式（弹窗、推荐、视频广告）。避免不准确或混乱的描述（如“shake your phones”应更明确说明是某种快捷方式或功能）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone, especially in shopping apps and short video platforms. For instance, many apps show pop-up promotions or sponsored product links that lead directly to Taobao.

× Of course, when I was a child, I saw a cough medicine advertisement about a woman was being chased chased by a tiger and the tiger was very fierce.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I saw a cough medicine advertisement about a woman who was being chased by a very fierce tiger.

句子使用过去时描述过去发生的情节，主句和从句都应使用过去时。原句中从句结构不完整，缺少关系代词"who"，且重复了"chased"。建议在从句前加关系代词并将词序调整为"a very fierce tiger"以符合英语习惯。

× This makes me feel very scared about it.

✓ That made me feel very scared.

这里叙述的是过去的经历，应该用过去时而不是一般现在时。"about it"在此处多余且不自然，改为简单的过去感受"made me feel very scared"更准确。

× Yes, not only the poster, but also the recordings in the radio when I was on air or on bus or any kind of public transportation.

✓ Yes, not only the posters, but also the recordings on the radio when I was on a train or on a bus or any kind of public transportation.

名词单复数需一致，原句中"poster"应为复数以对应泛指。介词搭配错误：应说"on the radio"而不是"in the radio"；交通工具前加冠词"a"或用于特定交通工具前加定冠词。将"on air"改为更自然的"on a train"或保留上下文一致性。

× The advertisement will around my hair repeatedly.

✓ The advertisement would play around me repeatedly.

原句语序混乱且有拼写/词汇错误（"hair"显然错误，应为"hear"或更合适的表达）。根据语境应使用过去习惯性动作，用"would play"或"kept playing"，并用介词"around me"或更自然地说"play repeatedly"。建议用"would play around me repeatedly"或"kept playing repeatedly"。

× No, I don't, especially when I was watching some TV series and for some emergency characters comes to a consequence, uh, advertisement comes out to disturb it.

✓ No, I don't, especially when I was watching some TV series and at an exciting moment for some characters, an advertisement would come out and disturb it.

句中时态混杂：开头用现在时否定（I don't），随后描述过去经历应统一用过去时或表达常态用现在时习惯。这里更自然表述为过去常发生的情况，用"would come out"。另外，"for some emergency characters comes to a consequence"结构不通，改为"at an exciting moment for some characters"更贴切。

× Due to my personal tendency, maybe the uh advertisement act by my favorite actress makes me feel in it, so I was like to watch it.

✓ Due to my personal preference, advertisements acted by my favorite actress make me interested, so I like to watch them.

原句介词和词语搭配不当："tendency"应为"preference"以表达喜好；"act by"应为"acted by"或更自然的被动结构；"makes me feel in it"不符合英语表达，应为"make me interested"或"draw me in"。时态需与陈述一致，若表达一般喜好用现在时。

× Maybe on my phone, because in China there is an interesting sense that if you shake your phones, you can turns to Taobao in no more than three seconds because this application set different kinds of advertisements in.

✓ Maybe on my phone, because in China there is an interesting feature that if you shake your phone, you can go to Taobao in no more than three seconds because this application inserts different kinds of advertisements.

多个动词和单复数形式错误："phones"应与主语一致为单数或泛指时用"your phone"；"can turns"应为情态动词后接动词原形"turn"或更自然地用"go"；"set ... in"搭配错误，应为"insert"或"show" advertisements。建议使用"feature"而不是模糊的"sense"，并使动词形式正确。