Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct small errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a brief reason. Avoid redundancy (e.g., repeating 'not interested'). Watch sentence accuracy: use 'can't recall' instead of 'can recall' when you mean you do not remember.

Ejemplo: I can't recall any specific advertisement from my childhood. I wasn't interested in ads and focused on the TV shows instead, so the adverts never caught my attention.

Sugerencia: Good structure: clear topic sentence and supporting details. Improve coherence by using a linking phrase and a concise reason. Replace vague phrases like 'some transport systems' with one specific example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really, I don't see much advertising on public transport. For example, the city buses and metro have strict rules about ads, and I'm usually absorbed in my phone or a book, so I tend not to notice any posters.

Sugerencia: Clear opinion with reasons—good. Improve vocabulary variety and combine ideas concisely. Use linking words to connect reasons and a short example to make it more specific.

Ejemplo: I don't really like advertisements because they often feel intrusive and repetitive, which distracts me. For example, seeing the same commercial repeatedly during a show quickly becomes annoying.

Sugerencia: Good choice and reason, but fix grammar and avoid repetition. Use precise wording (e.g., 'provide useful information' not 'provide with'). Add one concrete example of useful information to strengthen the answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer informative advertisements because they provide useful details about a product or service, such as ingredients or prices, which helps me make better purchasing decisions.

Sugerencia: Answer is relevant and specific but a bit long and repetitive. Break into two sentences and use a linking word. Give one brief example of where they appear to be more concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes, I encounter advertisements constantly on my phone and computer, especially on social media and within apps. For instance, short video ads often pop up while I'm scrolling, which I find quite intrusive.

× I can recall any particular advertisement from my childhood, mainly because I was not interested in them.

✓ I cannot recall any particular advertisement from my childhood, mainly because I was not interested in them.

The original sentence used 'I can recall' which contradicts context 'Not really.' The issue is not strictly singular/plural, but the intended meaning requires negation. Replace 'can' with 'cannot' to express inability to recall. Suggestion: use 'cannot' or "I don't recall."

× I prefer to watch TV shows themselves rather than ads in between.

✓ I prefer to watch TV shows themselves rather than the ads in between.

Article error around plural noun 'ads' — here 'the ads in between' is natural. The main issue is present-tense preference usage is fine; correction adds definite article for clarity. Use 'the ads in between' or 'ads that come between episodes.'

× No, I haven't seen a lot of advertising on transport.

✓ No, I haven't seen much advertising on transport.

'A lot of' with uncountable 'advertising' is less natural than 'much.' Use 'much advertising' in negative sentences. Tense (present perfect) is appropriate.

× I suppose some transport systems have restrictions which limit their presence, and mostly I'm engrossed in my phone or book so I don't notice them around me.

✓ I suppose some transport systems have restrictions that limit their presence, and mostly I'm engrossed in my phone or a book so I don't notice them around me.

Use 'that' rather than 'which' for restrictive clauses. Also 'a book' is preferred. These are usage/preposition and article issues. Suggest using 'that' for essential clauses and include indefinite article 'a' before 'book.'

× Honestly, I don't like advertisements because I tend to think that they are intrusive and disruptive.

✓ Honestly, I don't like advertisements because I think they are intrusive and disruptive.

'Tend to think that' is wordy and weak; not a strict grammar error but style improvement: use 'I think' for clarity. Adjectives 'intrusive and disruptive' are correct.

× Sometimes they are very repetitive and just distract me a lot.

✓ Sometimes they are very repetitive and just distract me.

'Distract me a lot' is informal redundancy with 'very repetitive.' Removing 'a lot' makes sentence more concise. Present tense is correct.

× Personally, I prefer informative advertisements because they provide with the useful information on product or service and sometimes I find it helpful and it helps me to make informative purchasing decisions.

✓ Personally, I prefer informative advertisements because they provide useful information on a product or service and sometimes I find them helpful; they help me make informed purchasing decisions.

Errors: unnecessary 'with' after 'provide,' incorrect article use 'the useful information' should be 'useful information,' missing article before 'product or service' ('a product or service'), pronoun agreement ('them' for advertisements), word choice 'informative purchasing' → 'informed purchasing.' Also streamline clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I often encounter advertisements when I use my computer or phone and they appear almost everywhere on social media platforms, on websites and even within apps, and I find them very intrusive and disruptive.

✓ Yes, I often encounter advertisements when I use my computer or phone; they appear almost everywhere—on social media platforms, on websites, and even within apps, and I find them very intrusive and disruptive.

Grammar is generally correct. Suggested punctuation improvements (semicolon and commas) improve clarity. No tense change needed. This is mainly a sentence-structure/punctuation suggestion rather than a strict grammar correction.