Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Shorten and clarify your main point first, avoid unnecessary repetition and minor errors. Start with a clear topic sentence (which ad impressed you), then give one or two specific reasons and a short example. Also correct company names and be careful mentioning alcohol as a child—focus on production quality rather than personal desire to drink.

Ejemplo: A clear answer: "Yes. I remember TV commercials by Japanese beverage companies such as Asahi because they were beautifully filmed. For example, one ad used rich seasonal imagery and a calm soundtrack, which made the product look very appealing. As a child I admired the cinematography and storytelling rather than the product itself."

Sugerencia: Good structure and relevant detail. Improve coherence by using a linking phrase when contrasting places and add one specific example of regulation or a visual difference to be more concrete.

Ejemplo: A clear answer: "Yes, there are many ads on Japanese buses and trains, where whole cars are often wrapped with colourful promotions. By contrast, in the UK and France advertisements are less common, partly because local regulations and cultural attitudes limit placement on public transport."

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid vague or incorrect references (e.g., 'Denzel' is a person, not a company). Use linking words for contrast and give a brief specific example of what you like and dislike to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: A clear answer: "It depends. I like high-quality commercials from large Japanese brands because their storytelling and production values are strong. However, I find ads from unknown creators can be sloppy and distracting; for example, low-quality sound or poor editing often makes the message unclear."

Sugerencia: Strong answer with specific examples. Improve slightly by adding a linking phrase and a short comment on why seasonal themes are effective (emotional connection or vivid imagery). Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: A clear answer: "I prefer ads from well-known Japanese beverage brands such as Suntory and Sapporo because their high budgets allow beautiful seasonal campaigns. For example, a winter ad with warm lighting and music creates an emotional connection that makes the product memorable."

Sugerencia: Make the sentence clearer and avoid repetition. State the main idea first, then give two concise examples (YouTube, apps or games). Correct awkward phrasing like 'watch several movies to watch films' and 'have to play several movies to play smartphone games.'

Ejemplo: A clear answer: "Yes, I see a lot of ads on my phone and computer. For example, YouTube often requires watching short ads before videos, and many free mobile games interrupt gameplay with video adverts."

× I was fascinated by advertisements made by Japanese alcoholic beverages companies like Kidding and Asahi because the films were well made and that made me want to drink alcoholic beverages like beer and wine, even though I was too young to drink.

✓ I was fascinated by advertisements made by Japanese alcoholic beverage companies like Kirin and Asahi because the films were well made and they made me want to drink beverages like beer and wine, even though I was too young to drink.

The phrase 'alcoholic beverages companies' incorrectly uses the plural noun 'beverages' as a modifier. Use the singular noun 'beverage' to form the compound noun 'alcoholic beverage companies.' Also 'that made me' is better as 'they made me' to refer clearly to 'the films.' Additionally corrected the brand name 'Kidding' to likely 'Kirin' (a known Japanese brewer). Suggestion: use singular nouns for noun modifiers and clear pronoun references.

× However, you cannot see many on European transport in countries like the UK and France.

✓ However, you do not see many on public transport in European countries like the UK and France.

The original uses 'on European transport' which is awkward; 'public transport' is the correct collocation. Also 'you cannot see many' is odd in context; 'you do not see many' is a natural present-tense observation. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'public transport' and match verb choice to meaning.

× I love watching movies made by Japanese well known companies like Denzel because the quality is often very high and storytelling are easy to follow.

✓ I love watching ads made by well-known Japanese companies because the quality is often very high and the storytelling is easy to follow.

'well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used before a noun. Word order 'Japanese well-known companies' is awkward; 'well-known Japanese companies' is correct. 'Denzel' is a person, not a company, so removed. 'storytelling are' is subject-verb disagreement; 'storytelling' is singular and takes 'is.' Also 'movies' is inconsistent with 'advertisements' context; 'ads' or 'commercials' fits better. Suggestion: use hyphenation for compound adjectives before nouns, correct word order, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose vocabulary consistent with context.

× However, I dislike show movies made by individual creators and small companies because the quality is often very low and unprofessional.

✓ However, I dislike short films or homemade ads made by individual creators and small companies because the quality is often very low and unprofessional.

'show movies' is not a correct phrase; likely intended 'short films' or 'showcase movies' but in advertising context 'homemade ads' or 'short films' fits. 'show movies' is incorrect adjective-noun pairing. Suggestion: choose accurate terms and maintain consistency with context.

× I love advertisements made by Japanese famous food and beverages companies like Suntory and Sapporo because they have large budgets to produce high quality commercials and they are very appealing.

✓ I love advertisements made by famous Japanese food and beverage companies like Suntory and Sapporo because they have large budgets to produce high-quality commercials and are very appealing.

Use singular 'beverage' as modifier: 'food and beverage companies.' 'Japanese famous' word order is incorrect; use 'famous Japanese.' 'high quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when modifying 'commercials.' Suggestion: correct modifier order, use singular noun as modifier, and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns.

× For example, they can make advertisements for each seasons from spring to winter and images are very vivid.

✓ For example, they can make advertisements for each season from spring to winter, and the images are very vivid.

'each seasons' mixes singular and plural; use singular 'each season.' Also add 'the' before 'images' for specificity and include a comma before conjunction joining independent clauses. Suggestion: ensure number agreement after 'each' and use definite article for specific nouns.

× Yes, I definitely believe that I have to watch many advertisements of frequently nowadays on smartphones and computers because you have to watch several movies to watch films on YouTube and Instagram.

✓ Yes, I definitely notice that I frequently have to watch many advertisements on smartphones and computers nowadays because you often have to watch several ads before watching videos on YouTube and Instagram.

The original misuses 'have to' and 'believe' in combination and places adverbs awkwardly ('of frequently nowadays'). 'Many advertisements of frequently nowadays' is ungrammatical. Clarified to 'frequently have to watch many advertisements ... nowadays.' Also 'watch several movies to watch films' is repetitive and incorrect; intended 'watch several ads before watching videos.' Suggestion: place adverbs correctly (e.g., 'frequently' after subject/modal), use 'ads' for short, and avoid redundant phrasing.

× In addition, you have to play several movies to play smartphone games.

✓ In addition, you often have to watch several video ads to play smartphone games.

'play several movies to play smartphone games' is incorrect collocation; users 'watch' ads rather than 'play movies' to access games. Clarified to 'watch several video ads.' Suggestion: use correct verbs for actions (watch ads, play games) and specify 'video ads' if needed.