Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng câu mở đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai, đồng thời thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: thương hiệu, nội dung quảng cáo, cảm xúc khi xem). Tránh câu thừa và giữ độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu. Nên dùng từ nối đơn giản để liên kết ý (e.g., because, so, which).

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, a TV commercial for a milk brand called SunnyMilk impressed me because it showed a loving family and a catchy song. I liked it mainly because the children in the ad looked happy and healthy, which made the product feel trustworthy. I still remember the melody because it was played on TV very often.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá trực tiếp nhưng nên cụ thể hơn: nêu ví dụ về loại sản phẩm thường thấy và tần suất, thêm liên kết ý để mạch lạc (e.g., for example, therefore). Sửa lỗi nhỏ về mạo từ và số nhiều. Giữ cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 câu hỗ trợ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many adverts on trains and buses. They are usually posters or digital screens advertising mobile apps, travel services, or local restaurants. For example, I often notice ads for food delivery apps on my commute, which I sometimes read simply to pass the time.

Sugerencia: Tốt đã nêu quan điểm nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp, làm rõ tiêu chí thích/không thích và cho ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., however, because). Hạn chế lỗi chia động từ và danh từ số nhiều.

Ejemplo: It depends. I like advertisements that are creative and meaningful because they tell a story or connect with my feelings. However, I dislike ads that are repetitive or too loud because they become annoying after a while.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi từ vựng ("viewers" không đúng, có thể là "visuals" hoặc "scenes"), hoàn chỉnh câu ví dụ cuối cùng và tránh lặp ý. Nên nêu 2–3 đặc điểm cụ thể và giải thích lý do ngắn gọn. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I prefer adverts that tell a short story or use gentle humour, and those with strong visuals and relaxing music. These elements make the ad more memorable and emotionally engaging. For example, a clever 30-second commercial that shows a family reunion with soft music can leave a lasting impression.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác, nêu tần suất cụ thể và ví dụ loại quảng cáo (ví dụ: social media ads, banner ads, pop-ups). Tránh viết tắt không rõ (UMM?) và hoàn chỉnh cấu trúc câu bằng liên từ phù hợp.

Ejemplo: Definitely. With the growth of technology, I see adverts on my phone every day, especially on social media and in apps. For example, I regularly encounter sponsored posts for clothing brands and banner ads for subscription services while browsing.

× You are a child. Actually, when I was a tried there was a TV advertisement about milk that impressed me.

✓ You are a child. Actually, when I was a child there was a TV advertisement about milk that impressed me.

'tried' is incorrect; the speaker meant 'child'. This is a word choice error rather than tense. Replace 'tried' with 'child' to make sense in past context. Note: Ensure vocabulary accuracy; use 'child' for age reference.

× It showed a happy family and had a catchy song.

✓ It showed a happy family and had a catchy song.

Sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no change needed. Suggestion: None.

× I still remember it clearly because it was soon very often on television.

✓ I still remember it clearly because it was shown very often on television.

Incorrect verb 'soon' used; correct past passive form 'shown' (past participle) with 'was' describes frequency. Use 'shown' after 'was' to form passive voice.

× Yes, definitely. I see a lot of advertisement on trains and buses.

✓ Yes, definitely. I see a lot of advertisements on trains and buses.

Use plural 'advertisements' with 'a lot of'. 'A lot of' requires plural countable noun here.

× They are usually posters and digital screens which promote products or services, but sometimes I only read them to pass the time during the trip.

✓ They are usually posters and digital screens that promote products or services, but sometimes I only look at them to pass the time during the trip.

Use 'that' for defining clauses with objects and 'look at' or 'read' depending on medium; 'read them' is fine for posters but 'look at them' is more general. Improved verb choice for clarity.

× It depends on the advertisement.

✓ It depends on the advertisement.

Sentence is acceptable; 'the advertisement' refers to a specific ad type. No change needed.

× I really like the advertisement that are creative are meaningful for me.

✓ I really like advertisements that are creative and meaningful to me.

Subject-verb agreement: 'advertisement' (singular) with 'are' is incorrect. Use plural 'advertisements' with plural verb 'are'. Also fix conjunction: use 'and' and correct preposition 'to me'.

× However, I dislike the advertisements that are repetitive or too loud.

✓ However, I dislike advertisements that are repetitive or too loud.

'The' before 'advertisements' is unnecessary in general statements; removing it makes the sentence more natural.

× I like advertisements that tell a short story or include humor, and I also enjoy those with beautiful viewers and relaxing music.

✓ I like advertisements that tell a short story or include humor, and I also enjoy those with beautiful visuals and relaxing music.

'Viewers' is incorrect here; ads have 'visuals' or 'scenery'. Use the noun 'visuals' to describe aesthetic elements of ads.

× These kinds of advertisements are more memorable and meaningful to me. For example, a clear a clever commercial with an emotional.

✓ These kinds of advertisements are more memorable and meaningful to me. For example, a clear, clever commercial with an emotional message.

Sentence fragments and extra article 'a' cause structure errors. Add a noun 'message' to complete the thought and use comma between adjectives.

× Definitely, especially in UMM nowadays when technology develop dramatically, so I often see the advertisement on my phone every day, which often product services.

✓ Definitely, especially nowadays at university when technology has developed dramatically, so I often see advertisements on my phone every day, which often promote products and services.

Multiple issues: 'UMM' unclear—use 'university' if intended; 'develop' needs past participle 'has developed' for present perfect; 'the advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'; 'product services' incorrect word order and form—use 'promote products and services'. Also avoid redundant 'often'.