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Sugerencia: 句子表达较清楚但存在语法和用词问题，部分句子重复且有冗余。建议：1) 使用更自然的时态与主谓一致（例如用过去时描述童年经历）；2) 合并相近句子以避免重复；3) 加入一两个具体细节（如广告的画面或旋律）并用连词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, a TV commercial for rainbow candies stayed with me because of its catchy jingle and bright animation. I used to sing along whenever it came on, and the colorful close-ups of the candy always made my mouth water.

Sugerencia: 回答内容明确但重复较多且有语法错误。建议：1) 避免重复表达相同信息；2) 用更准确的短语（例如 "on trains" 或 "in metro stations"）；3) 用连接词解释为什么觉得烦（给出具体原因）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport, especially in metro stations and on trains. I find it annoying because the posters and digital screens are everywhere and can be distracting during my commute.

Sugerencia: 表达有逻辑但多处词汇和语法不当，且句子有停顿词。建议：1) 避免使用口头语（umm）和不准确词（irritable 应为 irritating）；2) 用更流畅的结构先给观点再解释原因；3) 用更自然的结尾替代不完整句子。

Ejemplo: I don't really like advertisements, especially video ads that appear just before the climax when I'm binge-watching. They interrupt the story and spoil the viewing experience, though I don't mind static ads in other contexts.

Sugerencia: 内容清晰但词汇和句式有误，表达略显啰嗦。建议：1) 使用更准确的短语（time-consuming, no real benefit）；2) 修正不定式用法（avoid doing sth 而非 avoid to do）；3) 精简并用连接词对比不同广告类型。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I generally dislike video ads because they feel time-consuming and offer little real benefit. I usually skip them, but I don't mind static ads on walls or on my phone if they aren't intrusive.

Sugerencia: 回答具体且有例子，表达较自然但可提升连贯性与词汇准确性。建议：1) 使用更地道的短语（autoplaying video → autoplay video; breaks my train of thought → disrupts my concentration）；2) 可补充对策或频率描述使答案更完整。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer, and they can be very irritating. For example, when I'm concentrating on writing and an autoplay video suddenly starts, it disrupts my concentration and wastes time, so I usually use an ad blocker or close the tab.

× Even I sang along with that advertising video.

✓ I even sang along with that advertising video.

句子中“Even I sang along with that advertising video.” 语序不自然，‘even’ 放在主语前导致强调不当。此处不涉及动名词错误，但应调整词序以保证自然表达。建议将“Even”置于主语后或句首并加逗号，如“I even sang along...” 从而更符合英语习惯。

× An image of that rainbow candy was really delicious.

✓ An image of that rainbow candy looked really delicious.

原句用“was really delicious”把形容词“delicious”直接用于“image（图像）”，逻辑上图像不能“美味”，应使用动词“looked”来表达看起来很美味。建议使用描述外观的动词，如“looked”或“seemed”。（简体中文：图片本身不会“美味”，应说看起来很美味。）

× My mouth would be watering every time when I see it.

✓ My mouth would water every time I saw it.

原句时态混用：前半句用“would be watering”暗示过去习惯应使用过去式“would water”或“It would make my mouth water.” 后半句“when I see it”为现在时，与过去习惯时态不一致。根据上下文描述童年印象，应使用过去时，改为“would water”且将“see”改为过去式“saw”。（简体中文：时态要一致，描述过去习惯用过去时。）

× I saw it even on the walls of the metros and trains.

✓ I even saw them on the walls of the metro stations and trains.

原句中“metros”用法不自然，常用复数名词“metro stations”或“metros”，但与“walls of the metros”搭配笨拙。将“it”改为“them”指代前文“advertisements”，并改为“metro stations”更符合习惯表达。（简体中文：代词要与先行词数一致，且更自然地说“metro stations”。）

× It's really annoying to me to bump into advertisement everywhere.

✓ It's really annoying for me to bump into advertisements everywhere.

原句中“advertisement”为单数，语境为泛指广告应使用复数“advertisements”；此外介词搭配应为“annoying for someone”或“annoy someone”。因此改为“annoying for me to bump into advertisements everywhere.”（简体中文：主谓一致和名词单复数要与语境匹配，且注意介词搭配。）

× Well personally it's really irritable for me to bump into advertising video, especially when I'm binge watching because most of the advertisement videos are added into right before the climax of the plot.

✓ Well, personally it's really irritating for me to run into advertising videos, especially when I'm binge-watching because most of the ads are added right before the climax of the plot.

原句中用“irritable”不当，正确形容人或事物使人感到恼火应用“irritating”。“bump into advertising video”中“bump into”可替换为“run into”或“encounter”，且“advertising video”要复数或用缩略“ads”。“added into right before”语序错误，应为“added right before”。（简体中文：形容词选择要准确，注意单复数和固定搭配及词序。）

× But except from this, it's OK for me to.

✓ But apart from this, it's OK for me.

原句“except from this”搭配不当，应为“apart from this”或“except for this”。句尾多余“to”应删除。注意固定短语的正确使用。（简体中文：固定短语要记住正确用法，句尾不要有多余词。）

× I feel like it's time consuming with no efficient benefits.

✓ I feel like it's time-consuming and not very effective.

“time consuming”应连字符构成复合形容词“time-consuming”。“no efficient benefits”表达不自然，应改为“not very effective”或“of little benefit”。（简体中文：复合形容词要连字符，避免直译造成的表达不自然。）

× Umm so I avoid to watch advertisement actively.

✓ Umm, so I actively avoid watching advertisements.

动词“avoid”后须接动名词形式“watching”，不能接不定式“to watch”。此外“actively avoid watching advertisements”语序更自然，且“advertisements”应为复数。（简体中文：动词后接动名词或不定式要根据动词习惯搭配选择。）

× But if there are advertisements on the walls or on my phone, it's OK, I don't have strong inclination.

✓ But if there are advertisements on the walls or on my phone, it's OK — I don't have a strong inclination either.

原句缺少冠词“a”于“strong inclination”，且末尾添加“either”更自然表达也没有强烈倾向。注意名词短语的冠词使用和句尾连词。 （简体中文：名词前是否需要冠词要根据具体短语判断，补上“a”更地道。）

× For example, when I'm concentrating or writing and an ad suddenly pops up or autoplaying video starts, it breaks my train of thought and wastes time.

✓ For example, when I'm concentrating or writing and an ad suddenly pops up or an autoplaying video starts, it breaks my train of thought and wastes time.

原句中缺少冠词“an”修饰“autoplaying video”；此外“autoplaying”作形容词时可接受，但要与“video”一同使用并加冠词。也可改为“an autoplaying video starts”。（简体中文：注意形容词+名词前加冠词，确保成分完整。）