Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and vocabulary errors and is a bit repetitive. In English (Taiwan) focus on a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting detail. For example, say you were not allowed to watch TV as a child, then briefly explain the result (no memorable ads). Use linking words sparingly and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ejemplo: I wasn’t allowed to watch TV when I was a child, so I didn’t see many advertisements. As a result, I don’t remember any specific ad from that time.

Sugerencia: Good attempt to explain reason, but grammar and sentence structure are awkward. In English (Taiwan) make a clear main sentence then add a supporting reason with a linking word like "because". Be specific about the effect of ads (reach many commuters).

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many ads on trains and buses because public transport has a large number of passengers. Therefore, companies can reach more potential customers quickly.

Sugerencia: Your response structure is fine (use of 'it depends') but vocabulary and sentence completion need work. In English (Taiwan) use correct adjectives and finish your sentences. Replace unclear words like 'numb' with 'not relevant' or 'not interesting'. Give a short reason for each case.

Ejemplo: It depends. If an ad is about a product I’m interested in, I pay attention; otherwise, I ignore it because it’s not relevant to me.

Sugerencia: You express preferences well but need smoother grammar and fewer filler words. In English (Taiwan) state your preference clearly, then give a specific example using linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'. Avoid repeating words like 'so' and fix verb forms.

Ejemplo: I enjoy ads for new foods because I like trying new things. For example, I often look at restaurant ads near my area to find new snacks to try.

Sugerencia: The idea is clear but grammar and phrasing are awkward. In English (Taiwan) start with a concise answer, then explain with a clear reason using 'because' or 'since' and correct noun phrases (e.g., 'traditional methods'). Be specific about why mobile ads are effective (targeting, convenience).

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many ads on my phone. Companies advertise on mobile because it reaches more people than traditional methods like posters on trains, and mobile ads can be targeted to users.

× Actually I didn't allow to watch TV when I was young, so basically I haven't watched television since I was little.

✓ Actually I wasn't allowed to watch TV when I was young, so basically I haven't watched television since I was little.

The error is 'didn't allow to watch' which incorrectly uses active voice and the verb 'allow' without a subject; the correct passive form is 'wasn't allowed to watch'. Use past passive because the permission was given (or not) in the past. Suggestion: use 'wasn't allowed to' for past lack of permission.'

× So I cannot record any advisement that I have ever watched.

✓ So I cannot recall any advertisement that I have ever seen.

'Record' is not the right verb here; 'recall' or 'remember' fits. 'Advisement' is incorrect word choice; use 'advertisement'. Also 'have ever watched' is awkward for ads; use 'have ever seen'. Suggestion: replace verbs and noun to match meaning and collocations.'

× I think why companies put advisement on like transportation or other chains is because that there are a lot of people to take the transportation so it can.

✓ I think companies put advertisements on transportation and other places because many people use public transport, so the ads reach more people.

Problems: awkward clause 'I think why' and wrong preposition 'on like transportation or other chains'; 'other chains' is unclear. Also sentence ends unfinished 'so it can.' Correct by simplifying structure, use 'on transportation' or 'on public transport' and 'reach more people.' Suggestion: make subject-verb-object clear and avoid filler words like 'like.'

× Yes I do. I think why companies put advisement on like transportation or other chains is because that there are a lot of people to take the transportation so it can.

✓ Yes I do. I think companies put advertisements on transportation and other places because many people use public transport, so the ads reach more people.

'There are a lot of people to take the transportation' is ungrammatical; use 'many people use public transport.' Ensure subject-verb agreement (people + use). Suggestion: rewrite clause to subject + verb + object.'

× It depends. When the advisement is about the product I'm interested in, I will focus on it.

✓ It depends. When the advertisement is about a product I'm interested in, I focus on it.

Use 'advertisement' not 'advisement'. Tense: general habit uses simple present 'I focus' rather than future 'I will focus.' Also article 'a product' needed. Suggestion: use correct noun and present tense for habits.'

× However, when the advert advertisement is about the things I numb, I'm not interested, I will.

✓ However, when an advertisement is about things I am not interested in, I am not interested in it.

Multiple errors: 'advert advertisement' duplicated, 'numb' wrong word — likely 'not interested in' or 'I'm not interested in'. Also sentence trailing 'I will' incomplete. Correct pronoun references and complete clause. Suggestion: avoid repetition and complete thoughts.'

× Because I like to try new things, so I like ads about new foods or the snacks that I can give it a try.

✓ Because I like to try new things, I like ads about new foods or snacks that I can try.

Do not use both 'Because' and 'so' together; choose one structure. 'Give it a try' is unnecessary; 'I can try' is correct. Remove extra article 'the' before 'snacks.' Suggestion: simplify clause structure and keep verb-object collocation.'

× So I often watch the advertisement about like restaurant which is near to me.

✓ So I often watch advertisements about restaurants that are near me.

Use plural 'advertisements' for general statement. 'About like restaurant' is awkward — remove 'like'. Use 'near me' rather than 'near to me.' Suggestion: pluralize and use natural prepositions.'

× Yes I do. I think that companies put the advertisement on cell phone is because it can reach more people than like traditional way of post advisement like on the train or on transportation since that nowadays everyone got cell phone.

✓ Yes, I do. I think companies put advertisements on cell phones because they can reach more people than traditional methods like ads on trains, since nowadays everyone has a cell phone.

Tense and agreement: 'put the advertisement on cell phone is' is ungrammatical. Use simple present 'put advertisements on cell phones' and plural 'ads' and 'they can reach.' 'Everyone got cell phone' should be 'everyone has a cell phone.' Suggestion: use simple present for general truths and correct subject-verb agreement and pluralization.'

× I think that companies put the advertisement on cell phone is because it can reach more people than like traditional way of post advisement like on the train or on transportation since that nowadays everyone got cell phone.

✓ I think companies put advertisements on cell phones because they reach more people than traditional advertising methods like posters on trains, since nowadays everyone has a cell phone.

Use plural forms: 'advertisements', 'cell phones', 'methods'. 'Traditional way of post advisement' is wrong; use 'traditional advertising methods' or 'posters.' Suggestion: ensure nouns match plural context and use natural collocations.'