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Sugerencia: 回答主题句明确，但内容表达混乱，语法和词汇使用不准确，信息不够具体。建议在回答中使用一到两句补充细节（例如广告的情节、场景或你当时的感受），并用连接词使表达更连贯；注意语法（如时态、代词）和词汇搭配（例如 “helped her keep in touch with family”）。

Ejemplo: A TV commercial for a smartphone impressed me when I was a child. It showed a young woman using the phone to keep in touch with her family while travelling to different countries, and the ad used emotional music and realistic scenes to make viewers feel connected.

Sugerencia: 回答直接但有词汇和搭配错误，句子结构可以更简洁并加上连接词提高流畅性。建议改用正确搭配（例如 "on buses, subways and trains"、"on screens or posters inside the vehicles"），并举一两个具体例子说明广告类型或效果。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on buses, subways and trains. Often they appear on digital screens or posters inside the vehicles, and many ads promote local shops or events because public transport reaches a large and diverse audience.

Sugerencia: 回答简短但含错误（拼写和语法），理由不够具体。建议说明一两个具体原因并用连接词扩展，例如谈频率、针对性或干扰体验；同时注意拼写（advertisement）和代词使用。

Ejemplo: Not really. I find most advertisements irritating because they appear too frequently and interrupt videos I am watching, especially when they are irrelevant to my interests.

Sugerencia: 回答内容明确且有观点，但表达有重复和小错误（例如复数、连接词使用）。建议增加一两句具体例子或原因说明为什么这种广告打动你，并用连接词使句子更自然。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements about protecting animals because they raise awareness and encourage people to act. For example, a campaign showing injured wildlife and explaining how donations help rescue centres made me feel sympathetic and motivated to donate.

Sugerencia: 回答有信息但表达混乱，存在拼写和词汇错误（例如 “encountered” 时态、 'water advertisement' 不清楚、 'news website'）。建议使用正确时态和词汇，並给出具体例子说明广告形式与定位，例如有针对性的弹窗或视频广告。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially on social media and news websites. For instance, while scrolling through apps I usually get targeted ads based on my browsing history, such as suggested app downloads or sponsored videos.

× It showed how the phone held a young woman keep in touch with family, clothes, different countries and the emotion, music and real looking things.

✓ It showed how the phone helped a young woman keep in touch with her family, clothes, different countries, emotions, music and realistic things.

原句中動詞結構混亂。"held ... keep" 不正確，應使用 "helped ... keep"（help 後接動詞原形或不定式）。另外名詞複數、所有格需要調整（如 "her family"）。建議學會常見動詞後接何種形式（help + 原形，make/let + 原形，enjoy + -ing）。

× I see a lot of advertising on publishing spotlight buses, subways and trains.

✓ I see a lot of advertising on buses, subways and trains.

原句中短語 "publishing spotlight buses" 不自然且冗餘，應直接使用交通工具名詞並用介詞 "on" 表示在交通工具上出現廣告。簡化表達可提高可理解性。

× The advertisements are often shown on the screen or posts on the world inside the vehicle, so it's common way to reach many people.

✓ The advertisements are often shown on screens or posted on the walls inside the vehicle, so it's a common way to reach many people.

原句結構混亂，"posts on the world" 無意義；需要明確主語和介詞短語。修正為複數形式 "screens" 和被動動詞 "posted"，並補入冠詞 "a"。建議注意句子邏輯順序和正確短語搭配。

× Not really, I don't like most advertisement because they appear too often.

✓ Not really, I don't like most advertisements because they appear too often.

原句中名詞單複數使用錯誤，且屬於形容名詞問題。"advertisement" 應為複數 "advertisements"，因為說的是大多數廣告。建議確認可數名詞的單複數形式。

× AM can be annoying especially when I'm watching video.

✓ They can be annoying, especially when I'm watching videos.

原句中 "AM" 非標準（可能打錯），代詞與數不匹配。應用複數代詞 "They" 指代廣告，並使用 "videos" 的複數形式或加冠詞。建議注意代詞指代和名詞數的一致性。

× I like those advertisements about protecting animals.

✓ I like those advertisements about protecting animals.

句子語法正確，但可更自然地說為 "advertisements about animal protection" 或 "ads that protect animals"。此處僅給出改寫建議，原句時態無誤。

× This can raise people's awareness of protecting animal because the earth doesn't belong only to humans.

✓ This can raise people's awareness of protecting animals because the earth doesn't belong only to humans.

原句中 "protecting animal" 應為複數 "protecting animals"，表示對動物的整體保護意識。建議注意可數名詞與量詞搭配。

× Yes, I frequently encountered water advertisement on my phone and computer, especially on social media and new website.

✓ Yes, I frequently encounter ads on my phone and computer, especially on social media and news websites.

原句時態和詞彙有誤。原句使用過去式 "encountered" 與副詞 "frequently"（表示經常性）不搭配，應用一般現在時 "encounter"。另外 "water advertisement" 可能是拼寫或用詞錯誤，改為通用的 "ads"，"new website" 應為 "news websites"。建議根據語境選擇正確時態，並注意詞彙拼寫和複數形式。

× For instance, while scoring through apps, I often see targeted apps based on my browsing history.

✓ For instance, while scrolling through apps, I often see targeted ads based on my browsing history.

原句中 "scoring through" 是錯誤拼寫或用詞，應為 "scrolling through"（動名詞用法正確）。此外 "targeted apps" 應為 "targeted ads"。建議熟悉常用動詞短語和正確拼寫。