Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (what the ad showed, why it impressed you). Use linking words and avoid repetition. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. One advertisement that impressed me was for a new Mount Literacy school opening near my city. It showed friendly teachers and modern classrooms, which made me excited because I wanted to enroll and improve my reading skills. As a result, I asked my parents about joining classes.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain why ads are common on transport with a specific reason and example. Fix repetition and grammar; use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains and buses because transport is a good way to reach a large number of people. For example, clothing brands often put posters inside trains to attract commuters during their daily trips.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you like advertisements overall, then contrast types you dislike and like with clear reasons. Avoid filler words and grammatical errors; use linking phrases like 'however' and 'for example'. Stay within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Overall, I have mixed feelings about advertisements. I dislike those promoting harmful products such as illegal drugs; however, I enjoy ads that inform me about clothes and makeup because they help me discover new trends and useful products.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence naming your preferred type, then give specific reasons and a brief example why clothing ads appeal to you. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer clothing advertisements because they show styles and prices that help me decide what to buy. For example, an ad that demonstrates how a dress looks on different people makes it easier for me to imagine wearing it and decide whether it suits my taste.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then specify typical ad types and when they appear (social media, websites). Correct grammar and use linking words like 'for instance' or 'often'. Keep to 2–3 short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone, especially on social media apps and video sites. For instance, I regularly encounter ads about clothing trends, makeup, and kitchen gadgets while scrolling through Instagram or watching short videos.

× Yes, I still remember when I was a child there.

✓ Yes, I still remember when I was a child.

The word 'there' is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward; remove it to produce a natural English sentence. Suggestion: omit redundant location words when not needed.

× That time I saw one advertisement which which is related to opening a new Mount literacy school near my city.

✓ At that time I saw an advertisement about the opening of a new Mount Literacy School near my city.

Redundant 'which which' is a typographical error; 'which is related to opening' is awkward. Use 'about' or 'about the opening of' and correct noun capitalization. Suggestion: use 'an advertisement about the opening of' for clarity.

× That time I was very happy because I really want to enroll.

✓ At that time I was very happy because I really wanted to enroll.

The main clause is past ('was'), so the reason clause should also use past tense. 'Want' should be 'wanted' to maintain tense consistency. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same time frame unless indicating a change.

× Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains and other transport because it is the way it is the way of attract customers and also promote their product in the front of public.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains and other transport because it is a way to attract customers and promote their products to the public.

Repetition 'it is the way it is the way' is incorrect. Use infinitive 'to attract' and plural 'products'. 'in the front of public' is unnatural; use 'to the public'. Suggestion: simplify phrase to 'a way to attract customers and promote their products to the public.'

× From my perspective, I didn't like advertisements which is related to drugs or any harmful activity.

✓ From my perspective, I didn't like advertisements that were related to drugs or any harmful activity.

The clause refers to past dislike, so use past 'were' not present 'is'. Also 'that' is more natural than 'which' in restrictive clauses. Suggestion: match tense and use appropriate relative pronoun.

× But yes, I really like advertisement which is really, uh, related to give knowledge about umm, products which is related to clothes, accessories, makeup.

✓ But I really like advertisements that provide information about products such as clothing, accessories, and makeup.

Use plural 'advertisements'; 'which is really related to give knowledge about' is ungrammatical. Use 'that provide information about' and list items clearly with commas and 'and'. Suggestion: prefer concise verbs like 'provide information'.

× As earlier I said, I like different kind of advertisements such as related to education, makeup products, clothing, promotion of food etcetera.

✓ As I said earlier, I like different kinds of advertisements, such as those related to education, makeup products, clothing, and food promotions.

Word order 'As earlier I said' should be 'As I said earlier'. Use plural 'kinds' and 'those related to' for clarity. 'promotion of food' is better as 'food promotions'. Suggestion: reorder phrase and pluralize nouns where appropriate.

× But I usually prefer advertisement which is related to clothing.

✓ But I usually prefer advertisements that are related to clothing.

Use plural 'advertisements' to match general preference and 'that are' for correct relative clause and tense. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about types.

× Yes, when I using my cell phone, that time I usually cross with the different kind of advertisements relating new trends of clothes makeups, different kind of kitchen accessories, household and so on.

✓ Yes, when I use my cell phone, I usually come across different kinds of advertisements about new clothing trends, makeup, kitchen accessories, household items, and so on.

'When I using' is incorrect; use 'when I use' or 'when I am using'. 'That time' is unnecessary. 'cross with' should be 'come across'. Pluralize 'kinds' and items. Use 'about' for topics. Suggestion: choose correct verb forms ('use' or 'am using') and natural collocations ('come across').