Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating which advertisement impressed you, then give one or two specific supporting details (what the ad showed and what you did). Use correct past tense and avoid repetition. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: An example answer: "Yes. A TV advertisement for the Nintendo DS impressed me when I was a child. It showed colorful game characters and exciting gameplay, which made me ask my parents to buy it. However, my parents were strict about video games, so they refused to buy it for me."

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence (yes/no or a short statement), then one specific reason and an example. Avoid repeating words and correct grammar (e.g., 'during taking the train' -> 'while travelling by train'). Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: An example answer: "Yes, I see many advertisements on trains. They are effective because passengers often look around while travelling and have time to read posters; for example, I often notice travel and food ads on my daily commute."

Sugerencia: Answer directly (Yes/No) and give one clear reason with a short example. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'interrupt' not 'interruption'; 'I subscribed to Prime'). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: An example answer: "Not really. I dislike YouTube ads because they interrupt videos and break my concentration; for example, I often skip videos when ads appear, so I subscribed to Amazon Prime to avoid them."

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then give a specific type and a reason with an example. Remove hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words like 'however' and 'for example' to organize your answer.

Ejemplo: An example answer: "I don't usually like ads, but I do enjoy sports-related advertising. For example, basketball ads catch my attention because I played basketball for 20 years, and they have persuaded me to buy shoes and training gear."

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a concrete example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'when I use my phone' and 'ads appear on Instagram and TikTok'). Avoid vague claims like 'it cost me a lot'—state a specific effect. Limit to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: An example answer: "Yes, I often see ads on my phone when I use social media apps like Instagram and TikTok. They appear as short videos or sponsored posts, and sometimes they make me buy small items, such as phone accessories."

× But when I was a child, I saw or many advertisements on the TV about gaming.

✓ But when I was a child, I saw many advertisements on TV about gaming.

The sentence uses unnecessary words 'or' and 'the TV'. Use 'saw' (past) is correct for childhood, but 'on TV' is the natural expression. Remove 'or' which is extraneous and change 'the TV' to 'TV'. Suggestion: Say 'I saw many advertisements on TV about gaming.'

× It's for example the DS3DS are really impressed on me and I ask my parents to buy them.

✓ For example, the DS games really impressed me and I asked my parents to buy them.

The original misuses 'It's for example' and the passive 'are really impressed on me'. Use past simple 'impressed me' to show the effect on the speaker and 'asked' to match past time. Also clarify 'DS' to 'DS games'. Suggestion: Use 'For example, the DS games really impressed me and I asked my parents to buy them.'

× But actually my parents are so strict about buying some games, so they didn't bought me, they didn't buy for me.

✓ But actually my parents were so strict about buying games, so they didn't buy any for me.

Talking about the past requires past simple 'were' not 'are'. The correct negative past form is 'didn't buy' (base verb after 'did'). 'Buy for me' is unnatural; use 'buy any for me'. Suggestion: Say 'my parents were so strict... they didn't buy any for me.'

× I always watch advertisement a lot about advertisements on the train.

✓ I often see a lot of advertisements on the train.

Use 'see' or 'notice' rather than 'watch' for advertisements on trains. 'Always' + 'a lot' is redundant; 'often' or 'a lot of' is better. Use plural 'advertisements'. Suggestion: 'I often see a lot of advertisements on the train.'

× I think it's really good way to advertise the many products for the passengers, because during the during taking the train, there's nothing to do.

✓ I think it's a really good way to advertise many products to passengers, because during the train ride there's often nothing to do.

Use the article 'a' before 'really good way'. Remove 'the' before 'many products' and use 'to passengers' not 'for the passengers'. 'During the during taking the train' is ungrammatical; use 'during the train ride'. Suggestion: 'It's a really good way to advertise many products to passengers, because during the train ride there's often nothing to do.'

× So I think people gather, people are gathering at advertisement.

✓ So I think people pay attention to advertisements.

The sentence 'people gather, people are gathering at advertisement' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a clear verb phrase such as 'pay attention to advertisements' to express the intended meaning. Suggestion: 'So I think people pay attention to advertisements.'

× I don't like a department especially for YouTube advertisement because uh, there is it's really in interruption interrupted me and I couldn't watch continually YouTube video, so it's frustrating me as well.

✓ I don't like YouTube advertisements because they interrupt me and I can't watch videos continuously, so it's frustrating.

'A department' is incorrect here. Use 'YouTube advertisements' (plural). 'They interrupt me' is the correct verb structure. 'Continually' should be 'continuously' or 'without interruption'. Remove redundant words and use natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'I don't like YouTube advertisements because they interrupt me and I can't watch videos continuously.'

× So I hate it and I to avoid those advertisement I subscribed for Prime.

✓ So I hate them and to avoid those advertisements I subscribed to Prime.

Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'advertisements'. 'I to avoid' is incorrect—use an infinitive phrase 'to avoid'. Use 'subscribed to Prime' not 'subscribed for'. Also plural 'advertisements'. Suggestion: 'So I hate them and to avoid those advertisements I subscribed to Prime.'

× I don't like advertisement for in general, but actually if I say 1, I pick it up.

✓ I don't like advertisements in general, but if I had to pick one, I would choose it.

Use plural 'advertisements in general'. The phrase 'if I say 1, I pick it up' is unclear; replace with 'if I had to pick one, I would choose it' to express hypothetical choice. Suggestion: 'I don't like advertisements in general, but if I had to pick one, I would choose it.'

× Uh, supported advertisements like basketball playing advertisement because, which I, which is really impressed me because I played basketball for 20 years.

✓ I like sports-related advertisements, such as those about basketball, because they really impress me; I played basketball for 20 years.

'Supported advertisements' is unclear. Use 'sports-related advertisements' or 'advertisements about basketball'. 'Which I, which is really impressed me' is ungrammatical—use 'they really impress me'. Maintain past tense 'I played'. Suggestion: 'I like sports-related advertisements, such as those about basketball, because they really impress me; I played basketball for 20 years.'

× So when I saw some advertisement about basketball, it's made me, it made me buy some basketball stuff.

✓ So when I saw some advertisements about basketball, they made me buy some basketball gear.

Mixing present 'it's made me' with past 'saw' is inconsistent. Use past simple 'they made me' to match 'saw'. Use plural 'advertisements' and 'gear' or 'equipment' instead of 'stuff'. Suggestion: 'When I saw some advertisements about basketball, they made me buy some basketball gear.'

× I often see advertise advert advertisements when I use a form because when I use social media or something like Instagram or Tiktok, I usually the advertisement they usually show me up, show up to on the phone.

✓ I often see advertisements when I use my phone, because on social media like Instagram or TikTok, advertisements usually show up.

The original contains repeated and incorrect words ('advertise advert advertisements', 'use a form') and word order problems. Use 'use my phone' and 'ads usually show up' to be natural and grammatical. Capitalize 'TikTok' though not required here. Suggestion: 'I often see advertisements when I use my phone, because on social media like Instagram or TikTok, ads usually show up.'

× So it made me uh, it cost me a lot. It caused me buy something stuff.

✓ So they make me spend a lot of money. They cause me to buy things.

Use 'make me spend' rather than 'made me it cost me'. 'It caused me buy something stuff' is incorrect—use 'cause me to buy things' or 'make me buy things'. Ensure subject 'they' (ads) matches verb. Suggestion: 'So they make me spend a lot of money and cause me to buy things.'