Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid minor errors like '1' instead of 'one'.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I loved watching TV shows. One advertisement that really impressed me was for ice cream, which featured my favorite cartoon characters. This ad caught my attention because it combined something I enjoyed with the fun of cartoons, making it very memorable.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some vocabulary errors ('setbacks' should be 'backrests', 'overheard compartments' should be 'overhead compartments'). Try to use correct terms and add linking words for better flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, there is a lot of advertising on trains and other forms of transport. For instance, at the train station, I often notice ads everywhere, especially on the backrests of seats and overhead compartments. Moreover, whenever I feel bored during the journey, I usually look at these advertisements to pass the time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and informal expressions ('In my eye', 'Yeah', 'vision designs'). Use formal language and correct grammar, and try to expand your answer with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because, in my opinion, they are a special form of art. Furthermore, they often catch my attention with their impressive visual designs. In addition, advertisements help me discover new services and products.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes ('who has' should be 'that have', 'dove' likely means 'love') and vague expressions ('or something'). Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar, and provide clearer examples with linking words.

Ejemplo: As for me, I like advertisements that have creative designs, such as eye-catching visuals or impressive sounds. Moreover, I prefer ads that are relevant to my interests. For example, I am particularly interested in advertisements related to education or studying.

Sugerencia: Your answer is well-structured, relevant, and uses good vocabulary. To improve, you could add a linking phrase to connect ideas more smoothly and avoid minor errors like 'social medias' (should be 'social media').

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Advertisements have become ubiquitous in our daily lives, especially on our cell phones and computers. For instance, when I'm browsing social media or watching videos online, I often see targeted ads promoting various products. These ads help companies reach a wider audience and boost their sales.

× 1 advertisement that really impressed me was for ice cream, which featured my favorite cartoon characters.

✓ One advertisement that really impressed me was for ice cream, which featured my favorite cartoon characters.

The sentence starts with '1 advertisement' which is incorrect in formal writing. The number '1' should be written as the word 'One' when it begins a sentence to maintain proper grammar and style.

× I often notice advertising everywhere, especially on the setbacks or on the overheard compartments.

✓ I often notice advertising everywhere, especially on the setbacks or on the overhead compartments.

The word 'overheard' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'overhead' when referring to compartments above seats in trains or other transport. 'Overheard' means to hear something unintentionally, which is not the intended meaning.

× Whenever I feel bored during the journey, I usually look at this as to pass the time.

✓ Whenever I feel bored during the journey, I usually look at this to pass the time.

The phrase 'as to pass the time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'to pass the time' without 'as'. The preposition 'as' is unnecessary and makes the sentence ungrammatical.

× Yeah, and those advertisements always catch my attention with its impressive vision designs.

✓ Yeah, and those advertisements always catch my attention with their impressive visual designs.

The pronoun 'its' is singular, but it refers to 'advertisements' which is plural. Therefore, the plural pronoun 'their' should be used. Also, 'vision designs' is incorrect; the correct term is 'visual designs'.

× As for me, I love those who has creative designs such as eye-catching visual designs or impressive sounds.

✓ As for me, I love those that have creative designs such as eye-catching visual designs or impressive sounds.

The relative pronoun 'who' is used for people, but here it refers to 'those' meaning advertisements or things, so 'that' is more appropriate. Also, 'has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject 'those'.

× On top of that, I dove advertisements that are related to me.

✓ On top of that, I love advertisements that are related to me.

The word 'dove' is incorrect in this context. It seems to be a typo or misuse. The correct verb is 'love' to express liking advertisements.