Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a special Barbie doll from my childhood. It featured a catchy jingle and colorful visuals, which made it very memorable. Because of these elements, I really liked the ad and it left a strong impression on me.

Sugerencia: Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Begin with a direct answer, then add specific examples using linking words to make your response coherent and effective.

Ejemplo: I usually commute by car, so I don't see many advertisements on public transport. However, when I travel by subway, I notice various advertisements such as flyers and billboards at the stations.

Sugerencia: Work on reducing filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Not really. Like many people, I find most advertisements annoying because they often use hard selling techniques. This can lead to impulse buying, which usually results in buyer's remorse later.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your supporting details, making your answer more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer TV commercials because they usually have clear messages and engaging storylines. Additionally, they often use vibrant colors and catchy tunes, which make them appealing to watch.

Sugerencia: Try to speak more fluently by minimizing filler words and correcting grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. For example, when I watch YouTube videos, I often encounter pop-up advertisements. These ads are quite annoying because they distract me and interrupt my concentration.

× it was a advertisement of, uh, a kind of special, uh, Barbie doll

✓ it was an advertisement of, uh, a kind of special, uh, Barbie doll

The word 'advertisement' begins with a vowel sound, so the indefinite article 'a' should be replaced with 'an' to maintain correct article usage.

× I see so many different kinds of, uh, advertisement like Flyers or uh, even some, uh, billboards on the station.

✓ I see so many different kinds of, uh, advertisements like flyers or uh, even some, uh, billboards on the station.

The phrase 'kinds of' requires the noun following it to be plural. Therefore, 'advertisement' should be pluralized to 'advertisements' to agree in number.

× I find a most advertisements really, uh, annoying and bothering

✓ I find most advertisements really, uh, annoying and bothering

The phrase 'a most advertisements' is incorrect because 'most' as a quantifier does not require the article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× I find a most advertisements really, uh, annoying and bothering

✓ I find most advertisements really, uh, annoying and bothersome

The word 'bothering' is a present participle and does not function well as an adjective here. The correct adjective form is 'bothersome' to describe the advertisements.

× For example, when I, uh, exploring, when I'm exploring YouTube channels, uh, it's usually ended up, uh, some pop ups

✓ For example, when I, uh, am exploring YouTube channels, uh, it usually ends up with some pop ups

The verb 'exploring' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'it's usually ended up' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it usually ends up' to match the subject and tense. Additionally, 'ends up with' is the correct phrasal verb.

× it's usually ended up, uh, some pop ups

✓ it usually ends up with some pop ups

The phrasal verb 'end up' is followed by the preposition 'with' when indicating what happens eventually. Omitting 'with' is incorrect.

× because they absolutely distract your concentration

✓ because they absolutely distract you from concentrating

The phrase 'distract your concentration' is awkward. The correct expression is 'distract you from concentrating' to properly use the pronoun and verb form.