Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然且直接，但句子结构稍显简单，且缺少连接词使内容更连贯。建议在回答中加入更多细节描述和连接词，使表达更丰富和流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I saw a Lego advertisement that showcased some really fantastic toys, which immediately caught my attention. Because of that, I fell in love with Lego and wanted to play with their sets ever since.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且缺少逻辑连接词。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体描述广告的位置和形式。

Ejemplo: Well, I don't see a lot of advertising on trains, but there are some. For example, in my country, advertisements are often placed on the back of the seats, so you can easily see them when you raise your hand to hold the rail.

Sugerencia: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，且观点表达不够清晰。建议改进语法，使用更准确的词汇，并清楚表达个人观点。

Ejemplo: Although advertisements are necessary in modern life, I don't like them because I feel they invade my personal space and control what I can see or not.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词丰富句子结构，并具体说明喜欢的广告类型和原因。

Ejemplo: That's an interesting question. I prefer short video advertisements or brief episodes because they provide an engaging way to learn about products without taking too much time.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议加强语法和词汇的准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并清楚描述自己的行为和原因。

Ejemplo: No, I don't often see advertisements on my phone or computer because I usually close them quickly. As a result, the websites learn my preference and show fewer ads to me.

× I think I don't see lots of advertising, but there are really some.

✓ I think I don't see a lot of advertising, but there really are some.

这里“lots of advertising”中的“advertising”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“lots of”，应改为“a lot of”。另外，句子后半部分“there are really some”中“some”指代复数，前面应与之呼应。

× In my country you can see some advertisements in the train where are tapped on the back of your stairs so you can see it once you take up your hand.

✓ In my country, you can see some advertisements on the train, which are taped on the back of your seats, so you can see them once you raise your hand.

介词使用错误，“in the train”应为“on the train”。“tapped”应为“taped”，表示贴的意思。短语“back of your stairs”应为“back of your seats”。“take up your hand”应为“raise your hand”。此外，代词“it”应改为“them”，与复数“advertisements”一致。

× Well, although advertisement is necessary in our modern lives, I don't like advertisements.

✓ Well, although advertisements are necessary in our modern lives, I don't like advertisements.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为后文也用了复数形式，且表示一般意义的广告。谓语动词也应与复数主语一致，改为“are”。

× I felt it's a harm to our person rights of what sees I can see and what I couldn't.

✓ I feel it's a harm to our personal rights regarding what I can see and what I can't.

“felt”时态不符合上下文，应为现在时“feel”。“person rights”应为“personal rights”。“of what sees I can see”结构混乱，应改为“regarding what I can see”。“couldn't”应与前文时态一致，改为“can't”。

× I like advertisements in a small video or just a small episode because it gave me an interesting way to know the products.

✓ I like advertisements in small videos or just small episodes because they give me an interesting way to learn about the products.

“a small video”应为复数“small videos”，与“small episodes”保持一致。谓语时态应与上下文一致，改为现在时“give”。“know the products”表达不准确，应改为“learn about the products”。

× No, I don't often see it.

✓ No, I don't often see them.

“advertisements”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”，而不是单数“it”。

× As I stated before, I don't like advancement, so when the advertisement comes out, I click down on it and after them.

✓ As I stated before, I don't like advertisements, so when an advertisement comes out, I click on it and close it afterwards.

“advancement”用词错误，应为“advertisements”。“click down on it”表达不正确，应为“click on it”。“after them”表达不清，应改为“close it afterwards”。

× The website knows that I don't like assertions and don't recommend them to me.

✓ The website knows that I don't like advertisements and doesn't recommend them to me.

“assertions”用词错误，应为“advertisements”。谓语动词应与主语一致，改为“doesn't recommend”。