Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, чтобы ясно выразить мысль. Также стоит избегать избыточных и неясных фраз, делая ответ более естественным и связным.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, an advertisement that impressed me was a Christmas commercial by a cosmetics company. It featured a catchy song with their slogan, which played every year during the holiday season and became memorable for many people.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и конкретизировать детали, чтобы сделать ответ более информативным и естественным.

Ejemplo: Yes, in my country, advertisements are everywhere on public transport. Most of them are for casinos or just boring posters, which many people, including me, find unpleasant because they spoil the appearance of the surroundings.

Sugerencia: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и немного сложную структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные предложения, а также связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ejemplo: Actually, it's hard to say because I don't like all advertisements. However, I enjoy particular ones, especially creative ads or social advertisements that benefit society.

Sugerencia: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений. Рекомендуется использовать более формальные и точные фразы, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Ejemplo: I prefer creative advertisements because I really enjoy them. When I see such ads, I am amazed by how people come up with ideas and how wide their imagination is.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более связные и краткие предложения, а также разнообразить лексику для улучшения естественности речи.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see advertisements every day on my phone and computer, such as in browsers, social media, YouTube, and various apps. Nowadays, ads are everywhere because sellers want to promote their products, and it's hard to avoid them.

× there was very liked what is very exceptional for advertisements

✓ there was something very liked which is very exceptional for advertisements

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'There was very liked' is ungrammatical; it should be 'there was something very liked' to indicate a singular noun. This correction clarifies the subject and corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× who selled cosmetics

✓ who sold cosmetics

The verb 'selled' is an incorrect past tense form. The correct past tense of 'sell' is 'sold'. This is a common irregular verb mistake.

× and every year it made a Christmas wipe for everyone

✓ and every year it created a Christmas vibe for everyone

The phrase 'made a Christmas wipe' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended word was 'vibe'. Also, 'made a Christmas vibe' is better expressed as 'created a Christmas vibe'. This correction improves clarity and sentence structure.

× advertisement is everywhere in public transport

✓ advertisements are everywhere in public transport

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the plural verb 'are' and the meaning of multiple ads. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× this advertising is usually casino Ed or just boring posters which is made the surroundings ugly

✓ these advertisements are usually casino ads or just boring posters which make the surroundings ugly

'Advertising' is uncountable, but here plural 'advertisements' fits better. 'Casino Ed' is likely a typo for 'casino ads'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Which is made' should be 'which make' to agree with plural 'posters'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× if it is social advertisement that make the benefit to society

✓ if it is a social advertisement that makes a benefit to society

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'advertisement'. Also, 'the benefit' is better as 'a benefit'. This correction addresses subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× I really enjoy this kind of ad

✓ I really enjoy this kind of advertisement

The word 'ad' is informal; 'advertisement' is more appropriate in formal speech. This is a style suggestion rather than a strict grammar error.

× advertisements everywhere and we can't escape this because every seller want to promote their product

✓ advertisements are everywhere and we can't escape them because every seller wants to promote their products

The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with singular 'every seller'. 'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'every seller'. Also, 'escape this' should be 'escape them' referring to advertisements. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and pronoun use.