Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me as a child because I wasn't interested in them.」のように簡潔に答えることが大切です。

Ejemplo: I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me as a child because I wasn't interested in them.

Sugerencia: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「When I am on the train, I can see many advertisements, especially about travel, because trains are a popular means of transportation.」のように、正しい文法と自然な表現を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: When I am on the train, I can see many advertisements, especially about travel, because trains are a popular means of transportation.

Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。状況に応じた好みを明確に述べ、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、「It depends on the situation. Sometimes advertisements annoy me because they interrupt videos, but other times they provide useful information.」のように表現してください。

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. Sometimes advertisements annoy me because they interrupt videos, but other times they provide useful information.

Sugerencia: 意味が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。好きな広告の種類を具体的に述べ、理由を明確にしましょう。例えば、「I like watching informative advertisements because they help me learn new things and keep me interested.」のように答えると良いです。

Ejemplo: I like watching informative advertisements because they help me learn new things and keep me interested.

Sugerencia: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的かつ明確に答え、理由を述べましょう。例えば、「Yes, I often see advertisements when I watch YouTube on my phone or computer, and sometimes they annoy me because they interrupt the videos.」のように表現してください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I watch YouTube on my phone or computer, and sometimes they annoy me because they interrupt the videos.

× No, there isn't. This is because I can't remember a correct information and any reasons and.

✓ No, there isn't. This is because I can't remember correct information or any reasons.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction use and article errors. 'a correct information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'and any reasons and' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'or any reasons' to properly connect the ideas.

× It's a not important for me.

✓ It's not important for me.

The article 'a' is incorrectly placed before 'not important'. The correct form is 'It's not important' without the article.

× When I light on the train I can see a lot of advertisement, especially for traveling because it's a great transportation to.

✓ When I am on the train, I can see a lot of advertisements, especially for traveling because it's a great transportation method.

'light on the train' is incorrect; it should be 'am on the train'. 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'a lot of'. 'a great transportation to' is incomplete and incorrect; 'transportation method' or 'means of transportation' is appropriate.

× I can see a lot of advertisement

✓ I can see a lot of advertisements

'Advertisement' is countable in this context and should be plural when preceded by 'a lot of'.

× Sometimes it makes me annoying because it disturbs me watching the video while advertisement give me a new perspective or new information for about.

✓ Sometimes it makes me annoyed because it disturbs me while watching the video, but advertisements give me a new perspective or new information.

'Makes me annoying' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me annoyed' to express feeling. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with the verb 'give'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× I like watching other attachment makes me enjoyable feel enjoyable.

✓ I like watching other advertisements because they make me feel enjoyable.

'Attachment' is incorrect; likely meant 'advertisements'. The sentence structure is incorrect; it needs a conjunction and proper verb agreement. 'Feel enjoyable' is awkward; 'feel happy' or 'enjoy it' would be better, but 'feel enjoyable' is kept for minimal change.

× This is because I want to gain new information for getting more interesting.

✓ This is because I want to gain new information to become more interesting.

'For getting more interesting' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' followed by the base verb 'become' to express purpose.

× When I watch the YouTube on my phone or computer I. Which advertisement? So it's makes me annoying because they are interrupted videos.

✓ When I watch YouTube on my phone or computer, the advertisements make me annoyed because they interrupt the videos.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I.' and 'Which advertisement?' are incomplete. 'It's makes me annoying' is incorrect; should be 'make me annoyed'. 'They are interrupted videos' is incorrect; it should be 'they interrupt the videos'.