Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，且内容较为简单。建议用更自然的表达方式，注意时态一致，并且增加细节丰富内容。

Ejemplo: I can't recall any specific advertisement from my childhood because I was more interested in cartoons and TV shows rather than commercials.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够流畅，且结尾不完整。建议注意主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并补充完整观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport like buses and subways. They usually have digital screens or posters everywhere, so advertising is almost unavoidable.

Sugerencia: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且用词重复。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和语法，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like advertisements because they often interrupt videos I watch online and sometimes contain misleading information.

Sugerencia: 回答较为简单，语法有误。建议使用完整句子，丰富内容，并用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I'm not very familiar with advertising, but I prefer ads that have meaningful messages or unique designs because they catch my attention.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在时态错误和语法问题，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致，简化句子结构，并使用连接词。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer, especially on YouTube where ads usually play before the videos start.

× I don't pay attention to commercial when I was a child I more focused on cartoon and TV shows.

✓ I didn't pay attention to commercials when I was a child. I focused more on cartoons and TV shows.

这里涉及过去时态的使用错误。句子中“don't pay”是现在时，而后面提到的是过去的情况，应该用过去时“didn't pay”。另外，“commercial”应为复数形式“commercials”，且“more focused”应调整语序为“focused more”。建议将句子拆分为两句，表达更清晰。

× I don't pay attention to commercial when I was a child I more focused on cartoon and TV shows.

✓ I didn't pay attention to commercials when I was a child. I focused more on cartoons and TV shows.

“commercial”应为复数形式“commercials”，因为这里指的是广告的总称。同理，“cartoon”应为复数“cartoons”，表示多部动画片。

× Yes, I often see a lot of advertising on public transport such as on bus or in the subway.

✓ Yes, I often see a lot of advertising on public transport such as on buses or in the subway.

“bus”应使用复数形式“buses”，因为这里指的是公共交通工具中的多辆公交车。

× It are usually full of digital screen or post everywhere, so I think it is almost.

✓ They are usually full of digital screens or posters everywhere, so I think so.

主语“it”与后面的谓语“are”不一致，应改为复数主语“they”。“screen”应为复数“screens”，“post”应为复数“posters”。句尾“so I think it is almost”表达不完整，改为“so I think so”更合适。

× Umm absolutely not, because popular advertisements online are very super annoying when in when I watching video is usually interrupt me and I think the most advertisement is misleading information.

✓ Umm, absolutely not, because popular advertisements online are very annoying. When I watch videos, they usually interrupt me, and I think most advertisements contain misleading information.

“when in when I watching video”结构混乱，应改为“when I watch videos”。“is usually interrupt me”时态和语法错误，应改为“they usually interrupt me”。“the most advertisement”应为“most advertisements”。

× I probably prefer advertising that with meaningful message.

✓ I probably prefer advertising that has a meaningful message.

“advertising that with meaningful message”缺少动词，应加上“has”表示“有”。

× Meaningful message or some special design can catch my eye.

✓ Meaningful messages or some special designs can catch my eye.

“message”和“design”应使用复数形式，表示多种信息和设计。

× Yes, I often seen advertisement when I use my phone and computer, especially when I see video on YouTube on it usually have a advertisement when I start the video.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone and computer, especially when I watch videos on YouTube. There is usually an advertisement when I start the video.

“seen”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“see”。“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”。“see video”应为“watch videos”。“on it usually have a advertisement”结构错误，应改为“There is usually an advertisement”。