Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'because', you can say 'as' or 'since'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't remember any advertisement that impressed me as a child because they often interrupted my favorite TV shows, which spoiled my viewing experience.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements on public transport, such as posters and digital screens promoting new movies, products, and services.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on clear sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and irrelevant words. Use linking words to express your opinion clearly.

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that provide useful information, but most of them are annoying and irrelevant, so it depends on the content.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary words and be more concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer advertisements that offer useful information about new products or services because they help me save time when I search for quality items online.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct tenses and vocabulary. Also, explain your feelings clearly with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone while watching videos on YouTube or social media, and I find them annoying because they interrupt my viewing experience.

× I kind of hated those advertising when I was a kid because they usually popped up when I was watching my favorite shows on the television or even the movies, and they kind of ruined my experience while watching them.

✓ I kind of hated those advertisements when I was a kid because they usually popped up when I was watching my favorite shows on the television or even the movies, and they kind of ruined my experience while watching them.

The word 'advertising' is uncountable and refers to the activity or process, but here the speaker means individual ads, which are countable and should be 'advertisements'. This is a singular and plural issue where the plural form 'advertisements' is appropriate.

× There's a lot of them.

✓ There are a lot of them.

'There is' is used for singular subjects, but 'a lot of them' refers to a plural noun, so 'There are' should be used. This is a singular and plural issue involving subject-verb agreement.

× There are advertisement related to newly launched movies or products or services on the on public transportation, ranging from the posters to the digital screen.

✓ There are advertisements related to newly launched movies or products or services on public transportation, ranging from posters to digital screens.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'There are'. Also, 'the on public transportation' is incorrect; 'on public transportation' is correct. This is a singular and plural issue and a preposition usage issue.

× There are advertisement related to newly launched movies or products or services on the on public transportation, ranging from the posters to the digital screen.

✓ There are advertisements related to newly launched movies or products or services on public transportation, ranging from posters to digital screens.

The phrase 'on the on public transportation' is incorrect. The correct preposition phrase is 'on public transportation'. Also, 'the posters' and 'the digital screen' should be without 'the' when speaking generally. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles.

× We often don't see them holding new.

✓ We often don't see new ones.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning seems to be that new advertisements are not often seen. 'Holding new' is incorrect. The corrected sentence 'We often don't see new ones.' is clearer and grammatically correct. This is a sentence structure error.

× Well, it depends if the advertisement are are giving me some kind of really good information, I would love that kind of exercise.

✓ Well, it depends if the advertisements are giving me some kind of really good information, I would love that kind of experience.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'are'. Also, 'exercise' is incorrect in this context; 'experience' is the correct word. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect word choice.

× But the majority of advertising these these are rubbish and seed and as I'm sometime eat it because of them.

✓ But the majority of advertising is rubbish, and sometimes I get annoyed because of them.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repeated words and incorrect phrases like 'seed and as I'm sometime eat it'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and word choice. This is a sentence structure error.

× I like those that provide useful information myself as new products or services that can help me in my daily life.

✓ I like those that provide useful information, such as new products or services that can help me in my daily life.

The phrase 'myself as' is incorrect; it should be 'such as' to introduce examples. This is a sentence structure and incorrect word usage issue.

× Actually, I am a person that often browses through different networks, sourcing for the best quality of product and sometimes the ads really saves a lot of time.

✓ Actually, I am a person who often browses through different networks, sourcing the best quality products, and sometimes the ads really save a lot of time.

'Sourcing for' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'sourcing' without 'for'. Also, 'quality of product' should be 'quality products' (plural). 'The ads really saves' should be 'ads really save' to agree in number. This involves incorrect preposition use and singular/plural issues.

× Yes, I often see the ads when I am on my mobile when I am watching some online videos on YouTube or any other social media platforms.

✓ Yes, I often see ads when I am on my mobile watching online videos on YouTube or other social media platforms.

'The ads' can be simplified to 'ads' for general reference. Also, 'when I am on my mobile when I am watching' is redundant; combining into 'when I am on my mobile watching' is better. This is a sentence structure and article usage issue.

× Actually I honored because of theirs because it ruins the enjoyment of watching the videos.

✓ Actually, I get annoyed because of them because they ruin the enjoyment of watching the videos.

'I honored' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'I get annoyed'. 'Because of theirs' is incorrect; it should be 'because of them'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice issue.