Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态错误和句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地描述广告内容，并避免重复和冗余。

Ejemplo: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It showed a little girl accidentally riding her bike over an elderly woman, promoting a medicine. Many people probably remember it because it was quite memorable.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词时态和单复数形式错误。建议使用正确的语法，句子更流畅自然，并且避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on various types of transportation. For example, in my country, there are large ads on the sides of buses and small framed ads inside the MRT trains.

Sugerencia: 回答表达较为清晰，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because they can be very creative. They help companies communicate important information about their products to consumers.

Sugerencia: 回答中有过多的犹豫词和重复，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语，明确表达喜欢的广告类型，并给出具体例子。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that tell an intriguing story or feature funny actors. For example, I enjoyed the ad with the little girl riding her bike, which was very memorable.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，句子更简洁流畅，避免重复和不必要的词语。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my electronic devices. For instance, I once saw an Instagram ad about a backflip class, which surprised me.

× I think that a lot of these people have saw it when they're a children.

✓ I think that a lot of these people have seen it when they were children.

这里使用了现在完成时态的助动词'have'，后面应该接过去分词'seen'，而不是一般过去式'saw'。另外，'they're a children'中'children'是复数，前面不应该加不定冠词'a'，且时态应与过去时间点一致，改为'were children'。

× I think that a lot of these people have saw it when they're a children.

✓ I think that a lot of these people have seen it when they were children.

'they're a children'中，'children'是复数名词，前面不应加不定冠词'a'，且代词'they'应与复数名词一致，时态应为过去式，故改为'they were children'。

× Yeah, I do have saw, seen a lot of advertising on all kinds of transportations.

✓ Yeah, I have seen a lot of advertising on all kinds of transportation.

'have saw'是错误的时态搭配，应为'have seen'。'transportations'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，改为'transportation'。

× Yeah, I do have saw, seen a lot of advertising on all kinds of transportations.

✓ Yeah, I have seen a lot of advertising on all kinds of transportation.

'do have saw'结构错误，正确的现在完成时应为'have seen'。

× Like in our country we have a lot of huge advertisements on the outside of the bus and also there are little frames of advertisement in the MRT.

✓ Like in our country we have a lot of huge advertisements on the outside of buses and also there are little frames of advertisement in the MRT.

'bus'应使用复数形式'buses'，因为指的是多辆公交车的外部。

× Yes, I am interested in advertisements because advertisement could be really creative and sometimes it is a kind of means to show what the company wants the consumers to know about their products.

✓ Yes, I am interested in advertisements because advertisements can be really creative and sometimes they are a kind of means to show what the company wants the consumers to know about their products.

'advertisement'应使用复数形式'advertisements'，与前文保持一致。'could'改为'can'更符合表达习惯。'it is'改为'they are'以对应复数主语。

× Yes, I am interested in advertisements because advertisement could be really creative and sometimes it is a kind of means to show what the company wants the consumers to know about their products.

✓ Yes, I am interested in advertisements because advertisements can be really creative and sometimes they are a kind of means to show what the company wants the consumers to know about their products.

代词'it'应与复数名词'advertisements'一致，改为'they'。

× I umm, advertisements that could make me impressed are those that have a umm, intriguing story or those with funny actors.

✓ I umm, like advertisements that could impress me, such as those that have a umm, intriguing story or those with funny actors.

'make me impressed'表达不自然，正确用法是'advertisements that could impress me'，即使我感到印象深刻。

× Well, I definitely have seen a lot of advertisements on my electronic devices.

✓ Well, I have definitely seen a lot of advertisements on my electronic devices.

'definitely'的位置应放在助动词'have'之后，符合英语语序习惯。

× So for example, one time I saw a an advertisement on Instagram about a backflip class, which is so out of my surprise.

✓ So for example, one time I saw an advertisement on Instagram about a backflip class, which was so surprising to me.

'a an'重复使用不定冠词，应去掉其中一个。'which is so out of my surprise'表达不自然，改为'which was so surprising to me'更符合英语表达习惯。