Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 'catchy commercial Jingle'에서 'Jingle'의 첫 글자는 대문자가 아닌 소문자로 써야 하며, 추가적인 구체적인 설명이 있으면 더 좋습니다. 예를 들어, 어떤 종류의 장난감인지, 왜 인상 깊었는지 구체적으로 설명해 보세요.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I remember an advertisement for a colorful building block toy that left a strong impression on me. It had a catchy commercial jingle that I couldn't stop humming, and the bright colors of the blocks made it very appealing.

Sugerencia: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'a rather advertisement'는 잘못된 표현이며, 'advertisements'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 문장 연결이 부자연스러우므로 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만들어 보세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. For example, recently there have been many beauty product advertisements featuring popular influencers, which are very eye-catching and designed to attract young people.

Sugerencia: 답변이 너무 짧고 모호합니다. 좀 더 명확하게 자신의 의견을 표현하고, 이유를 덧붙여 구체적으로 설명해 보세요. 또한, 'Umm'과 같은 불필요한 말은 피하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: I don't really like advertisements because although some are informative, many of them are annoying and interrupt what I'm doing.

Sugerencia: 전반적으로 좋은 답변이지만, 'makes me lose interest'에서 주어와 동사의 수 일치 오류가 있습니다. 'make me lose interest'로 수정하고, 좀 더 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer short and creative advertisements because they quickly capture my attention and provide useful information. For example, a clever 15-second commercial can be very effective. On the other hand, repetitive advertisements can be annoying and make me lose interest in the product.

Sugerencia: 답변에 오타와 문법 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 'pond'와 'counter'는 잘못된 단어이며, 'phone'과 'computer'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 다시 구성해 보세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually see advertisements on my phone or computer. They appear quite often, especially as banners on social media platforms.

× Yes, I often see a rather advertisement on trains and buses.

✓ Yes, I often see quite a few advertisements on trains and buses.

'Rather' is incorrectly used here; 'quite a few' is a more appropriate quantifier for plural countable nouns like 'advertisements'. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural to match the context.

× Recently there have been many beauty products advertisements featuring popular influencers.

✓ Recently there have been many beauty product advertisements featuring popular influencers.

The phrase 'beauty products advertisements' is awkward; 'beauty product advertisements' is the correct form because 'beauty product' acts as a compound adjective describing 'advertisements'.

× repetitive advertisements can be annoying and makes me lose interest in the product.

✓ repetitive advertisements can be annoying and make me lose interest in the product.

The verb 'makes' does not agree with the plural subject 'advertisements'; it should be 'make' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I usually see advertisements on my pond or a counter.

✓ I usually see advertisements on my phone or computer.

'Pond' and 'a counter' are incorrect in this context; the intended words are 'phone' and 'computer', which are common devices where advertisements appear.

× They are appeared quite often, umm, especially on the banner of social media.

✓ They appear quite often, umm, especially on the banners of social media.

The phrase 'are appeared' is incorrect; 'appear' is the correct verb form. Also, 'banner' should be plural 'banners' to match the general context, and 'of social media' is better expressed as 'on social media'.