Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，明确表达广告内容和印象。

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I often saw an advertisement for a brand called Xijilong. It was impressive because it used a famous idiom about pursuing dreams, showing a boy who wanted to become an astronaut.

Sugerencia: 回答中有很多语法错误和重复，表达不连贯。建议使用简单句子，清晰描述看到的广告类型和感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains, buses, subways, and taxis. These ads are usually eye-catching and make traveling more interesting.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且含有许多口语填充词，表达不流畅。建议减少口语化词汇，完整表达观点和原因。

Ejemplo: Not really. I find advertisements annoying, especially when I am filling out forms or using apps and ads suddenly pop up.

Sugerencia: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，导致意思不清晰。建议用简单句表达喜欢的广告类型，并举具体例子。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that are dramatic or have interesting twists because they catch my attention. For example, some famous Thai ads have surprising plot reversals.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地描述广告出现的频率和感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially on social media and websites. Sometimes they are distracting and annoying.

× Yes, when I was a child, I'd always hear the advertising from the journey Julie brand call Xijilong in Chinese and it's really impressive because it it has a famous idiom that he wants.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I'd always hear the advertising from the journey Julie brand called Xijilong in Chinese and it's really impressive because it has a famous idiom that he wants.

这里的动词"call"应该用过去分词"called"来修饰前面的名词"brand"，表示品牌的名称。过去分词用作定语修饰名词时，表示被动或完成的状态。

× Yes, I always see the advertisements on trains or many other types of transportations such as the buses, the subways and taxis and this add this as always be always are are always careful and I catch eye-catching which makes the travelling much more.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements on trains or many other types of transportation such as buses, subways, and taxis, and these ads are always eye-catching which makes travelling much more interesting.

"advertisements"复数形式正确，但"transportations"应为不可数名词"transportation"。"the buses, the subways"中冠词不必要，且"this add this as always be always are are always careful and I catch eye-catching"句子结构混乱，需重组。"ads"为"advertisements"的缩写，复数形式。

× this add this as always be always are are always careful and I catch eye-catching which makes the travelling much more.

✓ these ads are always eye-catching which makes travelling much more interesting.

原句结构混乱，缺乏主谓一致，且词语重复。应简化为"these ads are always eye-catching"，使句子通顺且符合语法。

× Not really, I think because, uh, sometimes it will be very annoying, uh, when you all, especially when you, uh, scoring your forms and open an app, suddenly it's, it pop out in an advertisement.

✓ Not really, I think because sometimes it can be very annoying, especially when you are scoring your forms and open an app, suddenly an advertisement pops up.

"scoring"应使用现在进行时"are scoring"，表示正在进行的动作。"pop out in an advertisement"表达不正确，应为"an advertisement pops up"，使用第三人称单数动词"pops"。

× suddenly it's, it pop out in an advertisement.

✓ suddenly an advertisement pops up.

主语是单数"advertisement"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"pops"。

× I prefer the advertisement that have dramatic or interesting flaws because it will always catch my eyes and for example, the Thailand's advertisement famous of this is dramatic reverse in the plot in the plot.

✓ I prefer advertisements that have dramatic or interesting flaws because they always catch my eye. For example, Thailand's advertisements are famous for dramatic plot twists.

"advertisement"应为复数"advertisements"，与动词"have"保持一致。"catch my eyes"应为"catch my eye"，"eye"为固定搭配。"dramatic reverse in the plot"表达不自然，改为"dramatic plot twists"更准确。

× Yes, I frequently come across advertisements and on my phones or website or computer.

✓ Yes, I frequently come across advertisements on my phone, websites, or computer.

"come across advertisements and on my phones"中"and"连接不当，应直接连接"advertisements on my phone"。"phones"应为单数"phone"，"website"应为复数"websites"。

× This as often appeared on the social medias or some websites I visits, which can be sometimes distracting, but also uh annoying that you see a lot of uh ads on the website or on the.

✓ These often appear on social media or some websites I visit, which can sometimes be distracting but also annoying because you see a lot of ads on websites.

"as often appeared"时态和结构错误，应为"often appear"。"social medias"应为不可数名词"social media"。"I visits"应为"I visit"。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。