Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够自然流畅，句子结构有误，且信息表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I often saw a supplement advertisement called Nor Beijing It on TV during Chinese New Year. It was very repetitive and left a strong impression on me.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词，避免重复，并具体描述广告内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually see many updated advertisements when I take the subway. Since we often wait for about five minutes, these fascinating ads easily catch my attention.

Sugerencia: 回答结构不完整，句子断裂，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ejemplo: It depends on the advertisement's design. If the slogan is just repetitive and catchy, it can be annoying, especially in small spaces like elevators. However, creative ads with interesting products feel fresh and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: 回答较为简洁且表达清晰，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使回答更丰富。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that tell a story, like the Budweiser Bears series. They are both educational and emotional, which makes them memorable and enjoyable to watch.

Sugerencia: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely see advertisements on my phone or computer because I use ad blockers to prevent tricky ads. I prefer platforms without annoying advertisements.

× it's always an supplement for elderly people.

✓ it's always a supplement for elderly people.

冠词“an”用于以元音音素开头的单词前，而“supplement”以辅音音素开头，应使用冠词“a”。

× We can always see this repetitive advertisement through television in Chinese New Year.

✓ We can always see this repetitive advertisement on television during Chinese New Year.

英语中表示在电视上看到某物应使用介词“on”，而非“through”。表示时间时，通常用“during”而非“in”。

× I usually see various kind of updated advertising when I take a subway.

✓ I usually see various kinds of updated advertising when I take the subway.

“various”后应接复数名词“kinds”，且“subway”前应加定冠词“the”。

× Another time various kind of fascinating ad advertisement will catch my eyes.

✓ Another time, various kinds of fascinating advertisements will catch my eyes.

“various”后应接复数名词“kinds”，且“advertisement”复数形式为“advertisements”。

× If its slogan just repetitive and catchy.

✓ If its slogan is just repetitive and catchy.

句子缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。

× Sometimes if the inside with the product is creative, it is fresh.

✓ Sometimes, if the content of the product is creative, it is fresh.

“the inside with the product”表达不清，应改为“the content of the product”以表达产品内容。

× If that advertisement is conveyed by a series of storylines such as Budweiser Bears, it is educational and emotional when we see them.

✓ If that advertisement is conveyed through a series of storylines such as Budweiser Bears, it is educational and emotional when we see them.

表达“通过一系列故事情节传达”时，介词应为“through”。

× Not really, it is seldom happened through my phone or Tele or computer.

✓ Not really, it seldom happens on my phone, TV, or computer.

“happened”应为一般现在时“happens”，且“through”应改为“on”表示设备上发生的事情。

× As I said, the safety wall to prevent from these kind of tricky advertisement.

✓ As I said, there is a safety wall to prevent these kinds of tricky advertisements.

“prevent”后不接“from”，且“these kind of”应为“these kinds of”，且“advertisement”应为复数形式。

× I just want my platform be.

✓ I just want my platform to be safe.

句子缺少完整谓语结构，应补充不定式“to be”及补语。