Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'a catchy Jingle' (should be 'a catchy jingle') and 'fun visual' (should be 'fun visuals'). Also, the last sentence is incomplete and could be more coherent. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and check for subject-verb agreement and article usage.

Ejemplo: Yes, I vividly remember an advertisement from my childhood that left a strong impression on me. It was a commercial for a popular chocolate brand that used a catchy jingle and colourful animations to capture attention. The ad was memorable because it combined fun visuals with a joyful tune, which made it very appealing.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has several language errors and unclear phrases, such as 'a considerable amount for of advertising on twins' (likely meant 'a considerable amount of advertising on trains') and 'world's windows' (probably 'windows'). Also, the sentence structure is awkward and some words are misused. Focus on clarity, correct vocabulary, and sentence structure. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have noticed a considerable amount of advertising on trains and other forms of public transport. These ads are usually placed on the windows and even on the seats, making them hard to miss. For example, in my city, many companies use trains as a platform to promote their products.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are minor grammatical errors such as 'advertisement' (should be plural 'advertisements') and 'they informed me' (should be 'they inform me'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and vary your vocabulary slightly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do like advertisements to some extent because they inform me about new products and services that might be useful. For example, I often discover interesting gadgets or sales through ads on social media. However, I prefer advertisements that are creative and not too intrusive.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains several language errors and unclear expressions, such as 'emotional pill' (likely 'emotional appeal'), repeated words 'tend tend', and awkward phrasing in the last sentence. Work on clarity, correct vocabulary, and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer advertising that is creative and tells a compelling story. For example, commercials that use humour or emotional appeal tend to capture my attention more effectively, as they not only entertain but also make the product memorable, which I find very appealing.

× It was a commercial for popular chocolate brands that used a catchy Jingle and colorful animation to capture attention.

✓ It was a commercial for popular chocolate brands that used a catchy jingle and colorful animation to capture attention.

The word 'Jingle' should not be capitalised here as it is a common noun, not a proper noun. Capitalisation errors are considered under incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, but since this is a noun, it is best corrected for proper noun usage.

× The ad was memorable because it combined fun visual with a joyful tune making it.

✓ The ad was memorable because it combined fun visuals with a joyful tune, making it memorable.

The word 'visual' should be pluralised to 'visuals' because it refers to multiple visual elements. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a comma and repeating 'memorable' for clarity.

× Yes, I also noticed it a considerable amount for of advertising on twins and other forms of public transport.

✓ Yes, I also noticed a considerable amount of advertising on trains and other forms of public transport.

The phrase 'it a considerable amount for of' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a considerable amount of'. Also, 'twins' is a typo and should be 'trains'.

× These ads are usually placed on the world's windows and even on the seat, making them harsh to miss.

✓ These ads are usually placed on the windows and even on the seats, making them hard to miss.

'World's windows' is incorrect; it should be 'the windows'. Also, 'seat' should be plural 'seats' to match 'ads'. 'Harsh to miss' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hard to miss'.

× For example, in my city many companies use train as a platform to promote products.

✓ For example, in my city many companies use trains as a platform to promote products.

'Train' should be plural 'trains' because it refers to the general use of trains as platforms.

× Yes, I do like advertisement to some extent because they informed me about new products and services that might be useful.

✓ Yes, I do like advertisements to some extent because they inform me about new products and services that might be useful.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'they'. Also, 'informed' should be present tense 'inform' to match the present tense context.

× Yes, I do like advertisement to some extent because they informed me about new products and services that might be useful.

✓ Yes, I do like advertisements to some extent because they inform me about new products and services that might be useful.

The verb 'informed' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'inform' because the speaker is talking about a general truth.

× For example, I often discover interesting gadgets or sales through ads on social media.

✓ For example, I often discover interesting gadgets or sales through ads on social media.

This sentence is correct and requires no correction.

× I prefer advertising that's creative and tells a compelling story.

✓ I prefer advertising that is creative and tells a compelling story.

The contraction 'that's' is acceptable in spoken English but in formal writing 'that is' is preferred for clarity.

× For example, commercials that use humor or emotional pill to tend tend to capture my attention more effectively, such as not only entertain but also makes the product memorable, which I find very appealing.

✓ For example, commercials that use humor or emotional appeal tend to capture my attention more effectively, as they not only entertain but also make the product memorable, which I find very appealing.

The phrase 'emotional pill' is incorrect; it should be 'emotional appeal'. The repeated word 'tend' is an error and should appear only once. The phrase 'such as not only entertain but also makes' is incorrect; it should be 'as they not only entertain but also make' to maintain subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity.