Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho các sự kiện đã xảy ra và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'make' thay vì 'made'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và có cấu trúc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a commercial about Kenny's snacks that made a strong impression on me when I was a child. It was very appealing and made me want to buy the product. Because of that advertisement, I asked my parents to buy Kenny's for me.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on various transports. They appear almost everywhere, not only on taxis but also on trains and subways. Additionally, there are many banners and posters in public places.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'ever ties men' hay 'informative' sai cách.

Ejemplo: No, I don't really like advertisements because I find them annoying, especially when they appear in the middle of YouTube videos and interrupt my viewing experience. However, sometimes advertisements can be informative about new products.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, mạch lạc để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that are eye-catching, such as those with bright colors or catchy songs. These strategies help me remember the products, especially when the ads become popular online.

× there was a commercial that make a strong impression on me until now

✓ there was a commercial that made a strong impression on me until now

The verb 'make' should be in the past tense 'made' to agree with the past tense 'was'. This is a Past tense issue (ID 5).

× It's well about Kenny's, which I really love

✓ It's about Kenny's, which I really love

The phrase 'It's well about' is incorrect; 'well' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'It's about Kenny's'. This is an Incorrect use of the definite article (ID 17).

× the advertisement is really appealed to me that make me really wants to buy it Kenny's

✓ the advertisement really appealed to me and made me really want to buy Kenny's

The verb 'is really appealed' is incorrect; 'appealed' should be in past tense without 'is'. Also, 'make me really wants' should be 'made me really want' to match past tense and correct verb form. This is a Past tense issue (ID 5) and Subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× at that time I asked my parents to buy it for me

✓ at that time I asked my parents to buy it for me

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× Today's advertisement is a big hitters like it appear almost everywhere

✓ Today's advertisements are big hitters; they appear almost everywhere

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'big hitters' (plural). Also, 'it appear' should be 'they appear' to agree with plural subject. This is a Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and Subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× not only on the transport but under St. good hi and banners

✓ not only on transport but also on street signs and banners

The phrase 'under St. good hi' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'on street signs'. Prepositions and nouns are used incorrectly here. This is an Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× And I see it every day on the taxi or even though the train or the subway too

✓ And I see it every day on taxis or even on the train or the subway too

'On the taxi' should be 'on taxis' (plural) and 'even though the train' is incorrect; it should be 'even on the train'. This is Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and Singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× No, I don't really like ever ties men because I found it very annoyed

✓ No, I don't really like advertisements because I find them very annoying

'Ever ties men' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'advertisements'. 'Found it very annoyed' should be 'find them very annoying' to correctly express the feeling. This is Incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and Incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× especially when I watched a YouTube video an it's usually appear in the middle video which interact my viewing experience

✓ especially when I watch a YouTube video and ads usually appear in the middle of the video which interrupts my viewing experience

'Watched' should be 'watch' to match present tense. 'It's usually appear' should be 'ads usually appear'. 'In the middle video' should be 'in the middle of the video'. 'Which interact' should be 'which interrupts'. This is a Present tense issue (ID 6), Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11), and Subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× But sometimes it can be informatives, uh, for some products

✓ But sometimes it can be informative for some products

'Informatives' is incorrect; the adjective form is 'informative'. This is Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13).

× I think some other ties Minton that eye-catching like it's being colorful or the team songs are other strategy of the brain make me memorable

✓ I think some other advertisements are eye-catching because they are colorful or have theme songs, which are other strategies that make them memorable

'Ties Minton' is a mishearing of 'advertisements'. 'It's being colorful' should be 'they are colorful'. 'The team songs are other strategy' should be 'theme songs are other strategies'. This is Incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14), Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13), and Singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× like I can remember all the products an maybe because it become viral online tool

✓ like I can remember all the products and maybe because it becomes a viral online tool

'An' should be 'and'. 'It become' should be 'it becomes'. 'Viral online tool' needs an article 'a'. This is Incorrect use of conjunctions (ID 16), Present tense issue (ID 6), and Article errors (ID 22).