Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ejemplo: I didn't like advertisements when I was a child because they interrupted my favorite cartoons. Therefore, they never made a good impression on me.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，表达清楚自己的感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many posters and big screens with advertisements at the railway station. Sometimes they can be annoying, so I don't really like them.

Sugerencia: 回答不连贯，句子不完整，词汇错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ejemplo: Generally, I dislike most advertisements. However, if an ad has a short video with funny music, I find it interesting and might stop to watch it.

Sugerencia: 回答中有发音和拼写错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确词汇，清晰表达喜欢的广告类型，并举具体例子。

Ejemplo: Although I dislike most advertisements, I like those that teach me something new, such as ads about useful scientific products for daily life.

× But to the the advertisement always as a trusted this so I hate them and never make an impression on it.

✓ But the advertisements were always like this, so I hated them and they never made an impression on me.

这里“to the the advertisement always as a trusted this”结构混乱，且“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为指的是广告的整体。句子缺少谓语动词，且“make an impression on it”应改为“made an impression on me”，因为印象是对人的影响。建议使用正确的定冠词和复数形式，并调整句子结构。

× But to the the advertisement always as a trusted this so I hate them and never make an impression on it.

✓ But the advertisements were always like this, so I hated them and they never made an impression on me.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为指的是多个广告。

× But to the the advertisement always as a trusted this so I hate them and never make an impression on it.

✓ But the advertisements were always like this, so I hated them and they never made an impression on me.

描述过去的情况时，动词应使用过去时态，如“hated”和“made”。

× I only had a little time to watch cartoons on TV.

✓ I only had a little time to watch cartoons on TV.

此句中“to watch cartoons on TV”使用正确，无需修改。

× I will stop and have a look on it.

✓ I will stop and have a look at it.

短语“have a look”后应接介词“at”，表示“看某物”，而不是“on”。

× I hate them and never make an impression on it.

✓ I hated them and they never made an impression on me.

“them”指复数广告，后面应使用复数代词“they”，且“make an impression on it”中的“it”应改为“me”，因为印象是对人的影响。

× the big screens are unfun of other vertice Minton's, so I think they're a little bit annoyed and I don't love them.

✓ the big screens are full of other advertisements, so I think they're a little bit annoying and I don't like them.

“annoyed”是形容人的感受，广告不能感到烦恼，应使用“annoying”形容广告令人烦恼。

× the big screens are unfun of other vertice Minton's, so I think they're a little bit annoyed and I don't love them.

✓ the big screens are full of other advertisements, so I think they're a little bit annoying and I don't like them.

“unfun”不是正确的形容词，应使用“annoying”来表达令人烦恼的意思。

× Maybe I will stop and have a look on it.

✓ Maybe I will stop and have a look at it.

“have a look”后应接介词“at”，表示“看某物”，而不是“on”。

× Well to be honest, I almost hate all kinds of the Vertice Minton's.

✓ Well, to be honest, I almost hate all kinds of advertisements.

“Vertice Minton's”应为“advertisements”，且“almost hate”表达不自然，建议使用“almost hate all kinds of advertisements”。

× Well to be honest, I almost hate all kinds of the Vertice Minton's.

✓ Well, to be honest, I almost hate all kinds of advertisements.

“the”在此处不应使用，因为“all kinds of”后面直接接复数名词，无需定冠词。

× But if the advertisement with short videos and funny music and the store is. Is very interesting.

✓ But if the advertisement has short videos, funny music, and interesting stores, it is very interesting.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，应使用“has”连接广告的特点，且“the store is”表达不清，应改为“interesting stores”。

× But if the advertisement with short videos and funny music and the store is. Is very interesting.

✓ But if the advertisement has short videos, funny music, and interesting stores, it is very interesting.

原句断句错误，缺少谓语，导致句子不完整。

× I think they are.

✓ I think they are interesting.

句子不完整，“they are”后应有形容词或补语。

× Well, actually, although I almost hit her all kinds of advertisement, I still love the advertisement that could tell me something I truly don't know.

✓ Well, actually, although I almost hate all kinds of advertisements, I still love advertisements that can tell me something I truly don't know.

“hit her”应为“hate”，“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且“could”改为“can”更符合现在时态。

× Well, actually, although I almost hit her all kinds of advertisement, I still love the advertisement that could tell me something I truly don't know.

✓ Well, actually, although I almost hate all kinds of advertisements, I still love advertisements that can tell me something I truly don't know.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为指多种广告。

× Well, actually, although I almost hit her all kinds of advertisement, I still love the advertisement that could tell me something I truly don't know.

✓ Well, actually, although I almost hate all kinds of advertisements, I still love advertisements that can tell me something I truly don't know.

“could”表示过去或假设，句意为现在喜欢能告诉我新知识的广告，应使用“can”。

× For example, some cyantific productions that I need in my daily life, I will love it.

✓ For example, some scientific products that I need in my daily life, I will love them.

“cyantific productions”应为“scientific products”，“it”应改为“them”，因为指复数“products”。