Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and explain the advertisement clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, an advertisement about chocolates left a strong impression on me. It showed that eating too many chocolates without brushing teeth could harm them, which made me more careful about dental hygiene.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating words like 'usually' and add more details to make your answer richer and more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport since I frequently travel by train to nearby cities in India. These ads usually promote local products and services.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, explain why you like advertisements with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because they help me learn about new products easily. Moreover, advertising is an important part of business as it informs customers about different options.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer advertisements about gadgets because they provide detailed information about the products. This helps me decide whether I want to buy them or not.

× It was about chocolates and Colgate people who ate chocolates. Moon Their teeth were broken and harmed by.

✓ It was about chocolates and Colgate people who ate chocolates. Their teeth were broken and harmed by them.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear structure, making it difficult to understand. The phrase 'Moon Their teeth were broken and harmed by' is misplaced and confusing. Correcting the sentence structure clarifies the meaning that the people who ate chocolates had their teeth broken and harmed.

× Yes I do like advertisements because I can get 2 new by the product easily and promoting and marketing is essential way of business.

✓ Yes, I do like advertisements because I can easily get to know about new products, and promoting and marketing are essential ways of business.

The original sentence uses '2 new by the product' which is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Also, 'promoting and marketing is essential way' has subject-verb agreement issues and missing articles. The correction uses present tense properly and clarifies the meaning with correct word order and articles.

× I preferred advertisements on gadgets because I can easily get to know about the product and. Then I can think of buying it or not.

✓ I prefer advertisements on gadgets because I can easily get to know about the product, and then I can think about buying it or not.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. Using 'preferred' (past tense) is incorrect here. Also, the sentence has an unnecessary period after 'and' and awkward phrasing. The correction uses present tense and improves sentence flow.