Computers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một số từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng những cụm từ quá chung chung như "great convenience" mà nên cụ thể hơn để tăng tính thuyết phục.

Ejemplo: I usually use a computer when I need to complete assignments or prepare presentations because it provides great convenience and flexibility. For example, I can work from various locations such as home, cafes, or the library, which allows me to manage my time efficiently and stay productive.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đặc biệt câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết và chú ý hoàn thiện câu để tránh gây nhầm lẫn.

Ejemplo: I first used a computer about two or three years ago, right after I graduated from secondary school. Since then, it has been very helpful for my studies and for keeping in touch with friends.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu trả lời có thể được làm mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ nối. Ngoài ra, bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng số ít và số nhiều cho danh từ.

Ejemplo: If I didn't have a computer, my life would probably be quite boring because it plays an important role in helping me relax after long and stressful working hours. For instance, I often watch movies and listen to music on my computer to entertain myself. Moreover, without a computer, it would be difficult to stay connected with my friends through social media.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "like only to stay connected" và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: It would be very difficult for me to use a computer without a stable Internet connection because I mainly use it to stay connected with my friends on social media. Furthermore, many important resources and information are only available online, so without the Internet, completing my tasks would be quite challenging.

× My parents bought me a computer as a kid, and since then, it has become my best friend because it helps me with many tasks such as studying and staying connected with friends. I really appreciate how convenient and you.

✓ My parents bought me a computer as a kid, and since then, it has become my best friend because it helps me with many tasks such as studying and staying connected with friends. I really appreciate how convenient it is.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'how convenient and you,' which is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. The phrase should be completed to express the intended meaning, such as 'how convenient it is.' This correction completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× If I didn't have a computer, my light would probably be quite boring because computer plays an important role in helping me relax after a long and stressful working hours.

✓ If I didn't have a computer, my life would probably be quite boring because the computer plays an important role in helping me relax after long and stressful working hours.

The word 'light' is a typo and should be 'life' to make sense. Also, 'computer' is a singular noun and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific object. Additionally, 'working hours' is plural, so 'a long and stressful working hours' is incorrect; 'long and stressful working hours' without 'a' is correct.

× Additionally, without computer, it would be difficult to stay connected with my friends through social media.

✓ Additionally, without a computer, it would be difficult to stay connected with my friends through social media.

When referring to a singular countable noun in a general sense, the indefinite article 'a' is required before 'computer.' Omitting the article makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× Oh, it would be very difficult for me to use a computer without a stable Internet connection, because I really like only to stay connected with my friends on social media.

✓ Oh, it would be very difficult for me to use a computer without a stable Internet connection, because I really only like to stay connected with my friends on social media.

The adverb 'only' is misplaced in the original sentence. It should be placed before the verb phrase 'like to stay connected' to correctly modify the verb. Misplacement of adverbs can change the meaning or make the sentence awkward.

× Additionally, many important resources and information are only available online, so without the Internet it becomes quite challenging to complete my task effectively.

✓ Additionally, much important information and many resources are only available online, so without the Internet it becomes quite challenging to complete my tasks effectively.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'much' instead of 'many.' 'Resources' is countable and correctly uses 'many.' Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple activities. Correct quantifier use and noun number agreement are important for clarity.