Computers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a app”应为“an app”，且句子结构较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法准确性，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节描述。

Ejemplo: As a university student, I often use a computer to write reports and analyze experimental data. For instance, I use Microsoft Word to prepare my assignments because it helps me organize my work efficiently. Moreover, computers allow me to access various research materials online, which is essential for my studies.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，如“used together with my elder sister”应为“used it together with my elder sister”。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词。

Ejemplo: The first time I used a computer was in primary school when my elder sister showed me how to connect to the Internet. She also helped me create an account to chat with my friends, which made me feel very excited and curious about technology.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子结构较为简单，缺少连接词使表达略显生硬。建议增加连接词和更多细节描述，使回答更连贯自然。

Ejemplo: Without a computer, my life as a university student would be very challenging. For example, I rely on an app called Access to simulate machine operations, which helps me analyze experimental data accurately. Without this tool, completing my assignments would be much more difficult.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“Will I will be difficult”应为“Would it be difficult”。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的句型，并注意逻辑连贯性。

Ejemplo: It would be difficult for me to use a computer without Internet access. For instance, I wouldn't be able to communicate with my friends and professors effectively. Additionally, I couldn't use apps like TikTok or Bilibili, which I often watch to relax and refresh my mind.

× Well, as a university student I need to deal with a lot of experiments and report.

✓ Well, as a university student I need to deal with a lot of experiments and reports.

这里'report'应该用复数形式'reports'，因为前面提到了'a lot of experiments'，表示有很多，'report'也应保持复数形式以保持一致。

× So I need to use a app which called Word.

✓ So I need to use an app which is called Word.

'app'以元音音素开头，前面的冠词应使用'an'而不是'a'。另外，'which called Word'缺少动词，应改为'which is called Word'。

× It's really convenient to use it on computer, so I can finish my work successfully by using computer.

✓ It's really convenient to use it on the computer, so I can finish my work successfully by using the computer.

'computer'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指使用的电脑。

× I used together with my elder sister who taught me how to connect to the Internet and helped me create an account to chat with my friends.

✓ I used it together with my elder sister who taught me how to connect to the Internet and helped me create an account to chat with my friends.

'used'后面缺少宾语，应加上'it'，使句子完整。

× I still remembered that I felt really excited.

✓ I still remember that I felt really excited.

'still'表示现在仍然，应该用现在时'remember'，而不是过去时'remembered'。

× I always use an app called Access to simulate different situations on machines, which helps me analyze experimental data accurately.

✓ I always use an app called Access to simulate different situations on machines, which helps me analyze experimental data accurately.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× Will I will be difficult to use my computer without Internet?

✓ Will it be difficult for me to use my computer without the Internet?

句子结构错误，'Will I will'重复且主语错误，应改为'Will it be difficult for me'。另外，'Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。

× Furthermore, I can't use app like Tiktok or BBD which contains a lot of interesting videos.

✓ Furthermore, I can't use apps like TikTok or BBD which contain a lot of interesting videos.

'app'应使用复数'apps'，因为后面列举了多个应用。'contains'应改为'contain'，与复数主语一致。

× I can't relax or refresh my mind.

✓ I can't relax or refresh my mind.

该句语法正确，无需修改。