Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh) and repetition, and use linking words to add one specific reason or example. Fix grammar errors such as "it feels me relaxing" → "it makes me feel relaxed."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love drawing; it’s one of my main hobbies. I especially enjoy sketching mountain views and waterfalls because the natural scenes help me feel relaxed. For example, last week I spent two hours drawing a forest scene which helped me unwind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and provide a coherent reason with a specific detail. Remove hesitations and finish your thought. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to structure the reply. Correct plural and article usage: "different kinds of art" and complete the final clause.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries because I like to see different kinds of art, especially drawings and sketches. For example, last month I visited a local exhibition to study sketching techniques that I could try in my own work.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and a clear structure: topic sentence + supporting detail. Replace "always keen" with "I’m always keen" and "arts" with "art." Provide one specific action and an example of what you learned. Avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m always keen to learn more about art. For example, I watch tutorial videos by famous artists to learn watercolor techniques, and I recently learned how to blend colors to create smoother gradients.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and articles: "when I was a kid" and "I joined drawing classes." Provide a specific detail about what you learned or how it helped you and avoid fillers. Use linking words like "so" or "which" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a kid and I joined drawing classes to improve my skills. For example, my teacher taught me basic shading techniques, which helped me draw more realistic animals as I grew older.

× Yes, I love drawing, uh, even it is one of my hobbies, uh, I draw, I like to draw especially the mountain views, the waterfalls, the forest, the animals and because it feels me relaxing and it helps me to feel relaxing and calm.

✓ Yes, I love drawing. It is one of my hobbies. I like to draw, especially mountain views, waterfalls, forests and animals, because it makes me feel relaxed and calm.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'even it is' is awkward; use 'It is'. 'Feels me relaxing' is incorrect word order and verb form; use 'makes me feel relaxed'. Use plural 'forests' to match list. Also split into shorter sentences for clarity and natural speech. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, I always like to go to the galleries because I, I, I am, I want, uh, I always want to see a different kinds of arts, especially the drawings, the sketches. So I go to the gallery and to get a good.

✓ Yes, I always like to go to galleries because I want to see different kinds of art, especially drawings and sketches, so I visit galleries to get ideas.

Quantifier and article errors: 'a different kinds' is wrong because 'kinds' is plural and should not take 'a'; use 'different kinds of art' or 'different kinds of artwork'. Also 'arts' is usually uncountable in this context, so use 'art'. Remove repetitive filler. The final fragment 'to get a good' is incomplete; clarify purpose as 'to get ideas.' Grammar problem type ID:14

× Yes, I always keen to learn more and more about arts.

✓ Yes, I am always keen to learn more about art.

Missing verb and noun form: 'always keen' needs the verb 'am' to form a correct clause. 'Arts' is usually uncountable when talking about the subject; use 'art'. Also avoid 'more and more' redundancy; 'more' suffices. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For this I always try to watch videos of famous artists so that I can get inspiration from their work and learn more skills.

✓ For this, I always try to watch videos by famous artists so that I can get inspiration from their work and learn new skills.

Minor word choice and noun form: 'videos of famous artists' is acceptable but 'videos by famous artists' is more natural. 'Learn more skills' is vague; 'learn new skills' is clearer. Tense is present continuous habit so present simple 'try to watch' is fine. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I learned drawing when I was kid, even when I joined the drawing classes.

✓ Yes, I learned to draw when I was a kid, and I even joined drawing classes.

Verb form and article: use 'learned to draw' not 'learned drawing'. Insert article 'a' before 'kid'. Combine sentences with 'and' for clarity. 'Joined the drawing classes' is okay but 'joined drawing classes' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Uh, to improve my skills and learn as I am growing.

✓ I attended classes to improve my skills and to learn as I grew.

Tense and structure: the fragment lacks a subject-verb and mixes tenses. Use past tense 'attended' and 'grew' to match earlier reference to childhood. Alternatively, 'to improve my skills and learn as I grew' completes the thought. Ensure full clause with subject when speaking. Grammar problem type ID:6