Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct tenses and vocabulary, for example, 'prizes' instead of 'prices'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy drawing even though I'm not a professional artist. When I was in preschool, my mother took me to art competitions where I won some prizes. I like drawing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and correcting some errors. For example, use 'depicts' instead of 'debits' and 'famous artists' in plural. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit an art gallery if I get the chance. I believe that every artwork or portrait depicts important ideas or emotions that connect with people.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ejemplo: Not really. I prefer drawing small pictures or funny sketches, but I am not very interested in studying art in depth. I just enjoy creating simple drawings.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Please try to organize your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary. For example, 'teachers' instead of 'verses', and 'techniques using threads' if that is what you meant. Keep sentences simple and clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned drawing at school when I was a child. Our art teacher taught us different techniques and often gave us homework to practice drawing at home.

× When I was in my preschool that time, my mom used to take me to art competitions where I used to draw things, and I even got some prices.

✓ When I was in preschool, my mom used to take me to art competitions where I used to draw things, and I even got some prizes.

The word 'prices' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'prizes' which means awards. Also, 'in my preschool that time' is awkward; 'in preschool' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× I think behind every art form, every portrait there debits an important idea or emotion among human beings.

✓ I think behind every art form, every portrait depicts an important idea or emotion among human beings.

The word 'debits' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'depicts' which means to represent or show. This is an incorrect use of vocabulary, which falls under incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs category.

× I am a person who like to Draw Something like usually small pictures or small funny memes like that.

✓ I am a person who likes to draw something, usually small pictures or small funny memes like that.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular). Also, 'Draw Something' should be 'draw something' with lowercase letters. This is a subject-verb agreement and capitalization issue, categorized under incorrect use of pronouns and verb form.

× Only I do not really like to be on a keen interest of having learning more about art, I just like to make small paintings and drawings.

✓ I do not really have a keen interest in learning more about art; I just like to make small paintings and drawings.

The original sentence uses 'Only' incorrectly and has awkward phrasing 'to be on a keen interest of having learning'. The correction uses proper conjunction and prepositions to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, when I was a kid in my school they provided us art classes so the verses are who used to teach us drawing and he usually gave us homework also to complete at home.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid in my school, they provided us art classes. The teachers used to teach us drawing and usually gave us homework to complete at home.

'Verses are' is incorrect; it should be 'teachers'. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. The verb tenses are corrected to past tense consistently.

× So he also make a study about the interesting techniques using threats to draw beautiful pictures.

✓ So he also made a study about the interesting techniques using threads to draw beautiful pictures.

'Make' should be 'made' to match past tense. 'Threats' is incorrect; the correct word is 'threads'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and vocabulary.