Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'drawing' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy drawing, especially architectural buildings. Although I've been practicing for over 10 years, I usually focus on buildings rather than other subjects like people or objects, as this helps me enhance my creativity.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries because I can learn new ideas from the artworks. Moreover, the atmosphere is perfect for taking photos, and I often go there with my friends during my free time, which helps me recharge my energy.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your intention but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn how to draw different perspectives. Since I am interested in architecture, mastering this basic skill will help me design more creative and modern buildings. Therefore, I am eager to study this subject.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use proper tense and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your points with linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I never learned drawing in high school. However, during my gap year, I taught myself by watching tutorials on YouTube and other websites, which greatly improved my skills without any cost.

× Yes, I really enjoy drawing, especially building.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy drawing, especially buildings.

The word 'building' should be plural 'buildings' because it refers to multiple structures, not the activity of building. Using the plural noun fits the context of drawing multiple buildings.

× Even though I have been practicing drawing for more than 10 years, I never try to draw other pictures of things or humans.

✓ Even though I have been practicing drawing for more than 10 years, I have never tried to draw other pictures of things or humans.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have never tried' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now. Also, 'try' should be in past participle form after 'have never'.

× I mainly focus on buildings which make me more creative.

✓ I mainly focus on buildings, which make me more creative.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly separate the relative clause. This clarifies that the clause refers to 'buildings' and improves sentence readability.

× Yes, I really like to go to the galleries because I can learn other ideas through their art.

✓ Yes, I really like going to galleries because I can learn other ideas through their art.

The phrase 'like going to galleries' is more natural than 'like to go to the galleries' in this context. Also, 'galleries' is better without 'the' when speaking generally.

× In addition, the play is perfect to take a photo and I really like to go there with my friends when I'm in my free time.

✓ In addition, the place is perfect for taking photos, and I really like to go there with my friends in my free time.

The word 'play' is incorrect; it should be 'place'. Also, 'perfect to take a photo' should be 'perfect for taking photos' to use the correct preposition and gerund form. 'When I'm in my free time' is awkward; 'in my free time' suffices.

× It's really recharge my energy and.

✓ It really recharges my energy.

The sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb form. 'Recharge' should be 'recharges' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary here.

× Yes, I really want to learn how to draw different perspective.

✓ Yes, I really want to learn how to draw different perspectives.

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because it refers to multiple types or views. Using the plural noun fits the intended meaning.

× As I'm interesting in architecture, I need to learn this as a basic skills because this skill can help me to design more creative and more modern.

✓ As I'm interested in architecture, I need to learn this as a basic skill because this skill can help me design more creatively and more modernly.

'Interesting' should be 'interested' to correctly express the speaker's feeling. 'Skills' should be singular 'skill' to match 'a basic'. 'Help me to design' is better as 'help me design'. 'More creative' and 'more modern' are adjectives; adverbs 'more creatively' and 'more modernly' are needed to modify the verb 'design'.

× I'm looking to learn that subject.

✓ I'm looking forward to learning that subject.

The phrase 'looking forward to' requires the gerund form 'learning' after it. 'Looking to learn' is less natural and less common in this context.

× No I've never learned how to draw when I was in high school but I started learning by myself when I was in gap year from YouTube or the Internet.

✓ No, I never learned how to draw when I was in high school, but I started learning by myself during my gap year from YouTube or the Internet.

'I've never learned' is present perfect, but the time 'when I was in high school' requires simple past 'never learned'. 'In gap year' should be 'during my gap year' for correct preposition and article usage.

× It's really helped me my skills and without need for any money.

✓ It really helped my skills without needing any money.

'It's really helped me my skills' is incorrect; it should be 'It really helped my skills'. 'Without need for any money' should be 'without needing any money' to use the gerund form after 'without'.