Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语句不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，建议减少重复，注意时态一致，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I am not very fond of drawing now, but I really enjoyed it when I was a child. I used to draw many pictures and even participated in a competition at the age of seven, where I received a good grade.

Sugerencia: 回答内容不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't enjoy visiting galleries. Instead, I prefer spending time on activities I am interested in, such as going to the gym because I love working out and staying healthy.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议补充完整句子，避免语法错误，并用连接词连接观点。

Ejemplo: Actually, I am not interested in learning more about art. Instead, I want to improve my English skills so that I can speak fluently and confidently with foreigners.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但存在重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I did a lot of drawing when I was a kid, especially at the age of ten. Painting helped me feel relaxed and allowed me to escape from stress.

× I also participated the competition when I was 7

✓ I also participated in the competition when I was 7

动词participate后面需要加介词in，表示“参加某活动”。这里缺少介词in，导致用法错误。

× actually I get I got a good grade

✓ actually I got a good grade

句中出现了重复的动词get和got，且时态应为过去时got，去掉多余的get即可。

× I'm not a big fan of visiting gallery

✓ I'm not a big fan of visiting galleries

gallery是可数名词，表示“画廊”，此处应使用复数形式galleries，且前面有介词of，搭配正确。

× visiting gallery

✓ visiting galleries

gallery是可数名词，表示“画廊”，此处应使用复数形式galleries，表示一般意义上的多个画廊。

× spending time spending time that I really interest in

✓ spending time that I am really interested in

interest是动词，表达“感兴趣”时应使用被动形式interested，且需要主语I和be动词am，构成短语interested in。

× I really interest in

✓ I am really interested in

interest是动词，表达“感兴趣”时应使用形容词interested，且需要be动词am，构成正确表达。

× I enjoy visiting UMM Jane

✓ I enjoy visiting the gym

原句中的“UMM Jane”应为“gym”（健身房），且前面应加定冠词the。

× visiting UMM Jane

✓ visiting the gym

健身房gym前应加定冠词the，表示特指。

× I want to speak fluently on English

✓ I want to speak English fluently

动词speak后直接加语言名称，不用介词on，且副词fluently应放在动词后。

× speak fluently on English

✓ speak English fluently

副词fluently应放在动词speak之后，且speak后直接加语言名称，不用介词on。

× talk like umm confidently with English, with foreigners

✓ talk confidently in English with foreigners

表达“用英语自信地交谈”，应使用介词in English，且副词confidently放在动词talk之后。

× Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?

✓ Did you learn to draw when you were a kid?

learn后接动词时用不定式to do，表示学习做某事，learn drawing用法不当。

× I did a lot of drawing when I was a kid

✓ I did a lot of drawing when I was a kid

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× when at that time I enjoyed painting

✓ at that time I enjoyed painting

when和at that time重复，去掉when更通顺。

× that made me feel a piece, uh, relaxed

✓ that made me feel peaceful and relaxed

a piece用法错误，应使用形容词peaceful表示“平静的”，且连接词and连接两个形容词。

× I can escape from the stress

✓ I can escape the stress

escape后面一般直接加宾语，不用介词from。