Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免重复表达相同观点，如“我觉得太无聊”和“我觉得我没有天赋”表达了类似的意思。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: No, I don't enjoy drawing because I find it boring and I don't have much talent for it. Instead, I prefer spending my free time traveling to different cities or countries and listening to music.

Sugerencia: 回答中应注意语法和用词准确，如“each other cities”应为“other cities”，“customers”应为“customs”。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Definitely yes. When I travel to other cities or countries, I like to visit art galleries to appreciate beautiful paintings because it helps me learn about local cultures and customs.

Sugerencia: 回答应避免重复表达相同意思，如“unnecessary”和“not attracted to me”。建议用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

Ejemplo: Not really. Since my major is accounting, I don't think learning about art is necessary for me. Also, I find art knowledge a bit boring and it doesn't interest me much.

Sugerencia: 回答中应注意时态和表达的连贯性，如“liked me to take part”应为“liked me to take part in”。建议用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was young, my parents encouraged me to take art classes to develop a habit, but it didn't work because I didn't enjoy art or drawing in my free time.

× I think I didn't have the talent in drawing.

✓ I think I don't have the talent in drawing.

这里的时态错误，句子表达的是现在的情况，应该用一般现在时而不是过去时。

× I prefer to travel to each other cities or countries or listening music rather than drawing.

✓ I prefer to travel to other cities or countries or listen to music rather than drawing.

“each other”用错了，应该用“other”表示“其他的”；“listening music”应改为“listen to music”，动词后面需要加介词“to”。

× If I travel to each other cities or another countries, I really like to go to the art gallery to appreciate some beauty pictures.

✓ If I travel to other cities or other countries, I really like to go to the art gallery to appreciate some beautiful pictures.

“each other”用错，应为“other”；“another countries”应为“other countries”，因为countries是复数；“beauty pictures”应为“beautiful pictures”，形容词形式错误。

× I think it's a good way for me to learn the local cultures and customers.

✓ I think it's a good way for me to learn about the local culture and customs.

“customers”错误，应为“customs”（风俗）；“cultures”通常用单数“culture”表示某地文化。

× And sometimes I think the knowledge of art is a little boring and it was not attracted to me.

✓ And sometimes I think the knowledge of art is a little boring and it does not attract me.

“was not attracted to me”时态和语态错误，应使用主动语态一般现在时“does not attract me”。

× I was young. My parents always liked me to take part in some art classes.

✓ I was young. My parents always liked me to take part in some art classes.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Maybe they want to develop a habit for me, but they failed.

✓ Maybe they wanted to develop a habit in me, but they failed.

“want”时态应与上下文一致改为过去时“wanted”；“develop a habit for me”应为“develop a habit in me”，习惯是在某人身上培养。

× I don't like art and I don't like drawing some pictures when I was free.

✓ I don't like art and I don't like drawing pictures when I am free.

“when I was free”时态不对，表达习惯用一般现在时“when I am free”；“drawing some pictures”中“some”可省略，更自然。