Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use correct verb forms and capitalize properly. For example, say 'Yes, I like drawing. When I have free time, I often try to draw something, such as little flowers. Drawing reminds me of my childhood because I used to paint a lot back then.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I like drawing. When I have free time, I often try to draw something, such as little flowers. Drawing reminds me of my childhood because I used to paint a lot back then.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly first, then explain your preference clearly with linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I don't often go to galleries because I prefer going to the cinema. Watching movies with my favorite people helps me feel calm and relaxed.'

Ejemplo: I don't often go to galleries because I prefer going to the cinema. Watching movies with my favorite people helps me feel calm and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding slang like 'wanna' and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I want to learn more about art. For example, when I have free time, I watch art-related movies to improve my knowledge.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about art. For example, when I have free time, I watch art-related movies to improve my knowledge.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb tenses and expressions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I learned drawing when I was a child. My mother used to paint with me and taught me how to draw. It was my favorite activity. Even now, I enjoy drawing when I have free time.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a child. My mother used to paint with me and taught me how to draw. It was my favorite activity. Even now, I enjoy drawing when I have free time.

× I don't, uh, when I have time, I'm always trying to Draw Something, for example, when I'm at the lectures, at the lessons and drawing Little Flower, which is my childhood because when I was painting in my childhood, it was my idol.

✓ I don't, uh, when I have time, I'm always trying to draw something, for example, when I'm at the lectures, at the lessons and drawing little flowers, which remind me of my childhood because when I was painting in my childhood, it was my idol.

The verb 'Draw' should be in lowercase as it is not a proper noun. 'Little Flower' should be pluralized to 'little flowers' to match the context. Also, the phrase 'which is my childhood' is unclear and should be rephrased to 'which remind me of my childhood' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't know, I don't umm, for me, better is cinema.

✓ I don't know, I don't umm, for me, cinema is better.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and preposition usage. 'Better is cinema' is incorrect; the correct order is 'cinema is better' to express preference properly.

× When I have time, I'm trying to watch some movies with my favorite people because it's, it's connected, uh, for me, uh, with a calm and relaxed.

✓ When I have time, I try to watch some movies with my favorite people because it is connected, uh, for me, uh, with calm and relaxation.

The phrase 'I'm trying to watch' is better expressed as 'I try to watch' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'a calm and relaxed' is incomplete; it should be 'calm and relaxation' to correctly use nouns after 'with'.

× Yes I do. I wanna learn more about art, for example, when I have free time, which is really, really, I can uh, watch some artificial movies and I will, umm, increase my mind.

✓ Yes I do. I want to learn more about art, for example, when I have free time, I can watch some art movies and I will, umm, expand my mind.

The informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'Artificial movies' is incorrect; the correct term is 'art movies'. 'Increase my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'expand my mind' to express mental growth.

× Yes, I do. When I was a child, my mother was painting with me. We were driving and she learned me.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, my mother painted with me. We were drawing and she taught me.

The response to a past tense question should be 'Yes, I did' not 'Yes, I do'. 'My mother was painting with me' is better as 'my mother painted with me' for simple past. 'We were driving' is incorrect in context; it should be 'we were drawing'. 'She learned me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'she taught me'.

× Sometimes when I have time now I'm also drawing and it feels pleasure for me.

✓ Sometimes when I have time now, I also draw and it gives me pleasure.

'I'm also drawing' can be better expressed as 'I also draw' for habitual action. 'It feels pleasure for me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it gives me pleasure'.