Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy drawing because I have been practicing it since my childhood. It helps me relax and express my creativity.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or experiences related to visiting galleries.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I enjoy going to galleries because they remind me of important memories. For example, I often see photos that bring back special moments from my past.

Sugerencia: Improve vocabulary accuracy (e.g., 'heart' should be 'art') and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain why learning art is beneficial with specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is very relaxing and enjoyable. Moreover, it helps me cope with stress when I have a heavy workload at my job.

Sugerencia: Make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your experience and family appreciation.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to draw when I was a kid, and I enjoyed it a lot. My father and siblings appreciated my drawings, which encouraged me to continue practicing.

× I like drawing so much because I started drawing since my childhood.

✓ I like drawing so much because I have been drawing since my childhood.

The sentence incorrectly uses the simple past tense 'started' with 'since', which requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. Use 'have been drawing' to express this ongoing action.

× Uh, I really enjoy when the time of drawing.

✓ Uh, I really enjoy drawing time.

The phrase 'enjoy when the time of drawing' is ungrammatical. 'Enjoy' should be followed directly by a noun or gerund. 'Drawing time' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× Sometimes I used to get to gallery and they watch some photos.

✓ Sometimes I used to go to the gallery and watch some photos.

The phrase 'get to gallery' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the gallery'. Also, 'they watch some photos' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'watch some photos' referring to the student's action.

× Sometimes I used to get to gallery and they watch some photos.

✓ Sometimes I used to go to the gallery and watch some photos.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used here as it does not refer to any clear subject. The sentence should focus on the student's actions, so 'they' is removed.

× Yes, I want to learn more about heart because it is so relaxing and feel enjoyed.

✓ Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is so relaxing and enjoyable.

The word 'heart' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'art'. Also, 'feel enjoyed' is incorrect; 'enjoyable' is the correct adjective to describe something that gives pleasure.

× Sometimes it is a life savior.

✓ Sometimes it is a lifesaver.

The phrase 'life savior' is incorrect; the correct term is 'lifesaver', a compound noun meaning something that saves one from difficulty.

× When the time of really stress of having a workload of job, it is more useful.

✓ When I am really stressed from having a heavy workload, it is very useful.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'When the time of really stress of having a workload of job' is ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'When I am really stressed from having a heavy workload' for clarity and correctness.

× My father and my brothers sisters are appreciated of the same appreciated of my drawing because it is very.

✓ My father and my brothers and sisters appreciate my drawing very much because it is good.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'are appreciated' and 'appreciated of', which are ungrammatical. The correct verb is 'appreciate' in present tense to indicate their feeling towards the drawing. Also, 'brothers sisters' needs 'and' to separate the nouns.