Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy drawing because I have been practicing it since my childhood. It helps me relax and express my creativity.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about your experiences and feelings about galleries.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I enjoy visiting galleries because they remind me of important memories. For example, I often look at photographs that bring back special moments.

Sugerencia: Improve vocabulary accuracy (e.g., 'heart' should be 'art') and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is very relaxing and enjoyable. Moreover, it helps me cope with stress when I have a heavy workload.

Sugerencia: Make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your learning experience and family support.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned drawing as a child and enjoyed it a lot. My father and siblings appreciated my drawings, which encouraged me to continue improving.

× I like drawing so much because I started drawing since my childhood.

✓ I like drawing so much because I have been drawing since my childhood.

The sentence incorrectly uses the simple past tense 'started' with 'since', which requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. Use 'have been drawing' to express this ongoing action.

× Uh, I really enjoy when the time of drawing.

✓ Uh, I really enjoy drawing time.

The phrase 'enjoy when the time of drawing' is ungrammatical. 'Enjoy' should be followed by a noun or gerund. 'Drawing time' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× Sometimes it is, uh, it is a revoke of our memory.

✓ Sometimes, it is, uh, a reminder of our memory.

The word 'revoke' is incorrectly used here. The correct noun is 'reminder' to express something that brings back memories. Also, the phrase 'a reminder of our memory' is more appropriate.

× Sometimes I used to get to gallery and they watch some photos.

✓ Sometimes I used to go to the gallery and watch some photos.

The phrase 'get to gallery' is incorrect; 'go to the gallery' is correct. Also, 'they watch' is incorrect as the subject is 'I'; it should be 'I watch'. The sentence is corrected to reflect proper past tense usage and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I want to learn more about heart because it is so relaxing and feel enjoyed.

✓ Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is so relaxing and enjoyable.

The word 'heart' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'art'. Also, 'feel enjoyed' is incorrect; 'enjoyable' is the correct adjective to describe something that gives pleasure.

× Sometimes it is a life savior.

✓ Sometimes it is a lifesaver.

The phrase 'life savior' is incorrect; the correct term is 'lifesaver', a compound noun meaning something that saves one's life or helps greatly.

× When the time of really stress of having a workload of job, it is more useful.

✓ When I am really stressed from having a heavy workload, it is very useful.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the subject and verb agreement and uses proper expressions like 'really stressed' and 'heavy workload'.

× My father and my brothers sisters are appreciated of the same appreciated of my drawing because it is very.

✓ My father and my brothers and sisters appreciate my drawing very much because it is good.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and missing conjunctions. 'Are appreciated' is passive and incorrect here; 'appreciate' is the correct active verb. Also, 'brothers sisters' needs 'and' to connect. The sentence is completed for clarity.