Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I do not like drawing because I find it quite difficult. When I was in school, I struggled to draw different figures. However, I did try to draw a common hat scenery from my country, which many people can easily draw. Overall, drawing is not my favourite activity.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes like to visit galleries with my friends or family. It is a good way to spend time outdoors and enjoy art together. Moreover, visiting galleries allows me to bond with my parents and learn about different artworks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I am not very interested in learning more about art because I believe there are limited career opportunities in this field. However, if I get a chance, I would like to learn about the history of people who sacrificed their lives, as it is inspiring.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer structure and correct grammar. Respond directly, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific details about your experience.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned drawing as a subject in high school because it was compulsory. However, I found it quite difficult whenever my teacher asked me to draw pictures. Despite this, I tried my best to improve my skills.

× I compared to draw a hat scenery that is pretty common in my country and everyone able to make this type.

✓ I tried to draw a hat scenery that is pretty common in my country and everyone is able to make this type.

The phrase 'compared to draw' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'tried to draw' to indicate an attempt. Also, 'everyone able' lacks the verb 'is' for proper sentence structure.

× everyone able to make this type.

✓ everyone is able to make this type.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is' for subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, sometime I like to go to the gallery with my friends or family members because I found it as a part of hanging outside and it gave me opportunity to spend my time with my parents.

✓ Yes, sometimes I like to go to the gallery with my friends or family members because I find it a part of hanging outside and it gives me the opportunity to spend time with my parents.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Found' and 'gave' should be in present tense 'find' and 'gives' to match the habitual action. 'Gave me opportunity' needs the article 'the' before 'opportunity'. Also, 'spend my time' is better as 'spend time'.

× To me, next time I'm not interested in to learn about art because I think there are no scope in the art field.

✓ For me, next time I'm not interested in learning about art because I think there is no scope in the art field.

The phrase 'interested in to learn' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in learning'. Also, 'there are no scope' is incorrect; 'scope' is uncountable here and requires 'there is no scope'.

× there are no scope in the art field.

✓ there is no scope in the art field.

'Scope' is an uncountable noun and requires singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'.

× But if I get opportunity, I would like to learn about the history of that sacrifice their life.

✓ But if I get the opportunity, I would like to learn about the history of those who sacrificed their lives.

'Get opportunity' needs the article 'the'. 'That sacrifice their life' is incorrect; it should be 'those who sacrificed their lives' to refer to people in past tense.

× Yes Sir, I learned drawing when I was a kid because it as a subject in my high school and I did not have any another option.

✓ Yes Sir, I learned drawing when I was a kid because it was a subject in my high school and I did not have any other option.

'It as a subject' should be 'it was a subject' to use correct past tense. 'Any another option' is incorrect; 'any' and 'another' should not be used together; 'any other option' is correct.

× I compared to drawing and I found quite difficult whenever my teacher assigned me to draw a picture.

✓ I tried drawing and I found it quite difficult whenever my teacher assigned me to draw a picture.

'Compared to drawing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tried drawing' to express attempt. Also, 'found quite difficult' needs the pronoun 'it' to be grammatically correct.