Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تحسين قواعد اللغة واستخدام الأفعال بشكل صحيح، مثل استخدام 'drawing' بدلاً من 'draw' و'helps' بدلاً من 'help'. كما يجب تقليل التكرار والتركيز على التعبير بشكل أكثر وضوحًا وبساطة.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like drawing because it helps me express my feelings. Sometimes, it's hard to talk about my emotions, so I use drawing as another way to show them on paper with colors.

Sugerencia: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية صحيحة وربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي. مثلاً، استخدم 'interested' بدلاً من 'interest' وعبّر عن الأفكار بشكل أوضح مع استخدام أدوات الربط.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like going to galleries, but unfortunately, there aren't many galleries in my country because not many people are interested in art. Therefore, one of my dreams is to visit a gallery and learn about many artists.

Sugerencia: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام المفردات المناسبة. استخدم عبارات واضحة ومترابطة مع تجنب الأخطاء النحوية، ووضح أفكارك بشكل أكثر دقة.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about art because it is interesting. You need to be thoughtful to understand the meanings behind paintings and the deep stories they tell.

Sugerencia: حاول استخدام أزمنة الفعل بشكل صحيح وربط الجمل بشكل أفضل. مثلاً، استخدم 'I found' بدلاً من 'I find' وعبّر عن الأفكار بسلاسة أكثر.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned drawing from my mom because she used to draw. After that, I found myself interested in drawing and I love it, so I have continued practicing it.

× Yes, I really like draw because it's help me to express my feelings to people because I feel it's something hard to talking about my feeling.

✓ Yes, I really like drawing because it helps me to express my feelings to people since I feel it's hard to talk about my feelings.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'drawing' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8). Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 27). 'Talking' should be 'talk' because after 'hard to' the base form of the verb is used.

× Yes, I really like draw because it's help me to express my feelings to people because I feel it's something hard to talking about my feeling.

✓ Yes, I really like drawing because it helps me to express my feelings to people since I feel it's hard to talk about my feelings.

'It' is a third person singular subject, so the verb 'help' must be conjugated as 'helps' to agree with the subject (Grammar Problem Type ID: 2).

× Yes, I really like draw because it's help me to express my feelings to people because I feel it's something hard to talking about my feeling.

✓ Yes, I really like drawing because it helps me to express my feelings to people since I feel it's hard to talk about my feelings.

'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1).

× So I have another way. So I draw and I give all my feeling on paper and color.

✓ So I have another way. So I draw and give all my feelings on paper and color.

'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to indicate multiple emotions (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). Also, 'color' here is used as a noun and is acceptable, but 'coloring' could be used if referring to the action.

× I think this is the only way to express my feeling.

✓ I think this is the only way to express my feelings.

'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1).

× I think yes, but I don't have my country gallery because not all people are interest on the art.

✓ I think yes, but I don't have a gallery in my country because not all people are interested in art.

'Interest' should be 'interested' and the correct preposition is 'in' not 'on' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Also, 'my country gallery' should be 'a gallery in my country' for natural phrasing.

× I think yes, but I don't have my country gallery because not all people are interest on the art.

✓ I think yes, but I don't have a gallery in my country because not all people are interested in art.

'Interest' is a noun; the adjective form 'interested' is needed to describe people (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13).

× So I think one of my dream go to the library and learn about many artists.

✓ So I think one of my dreams is to go to the gallery and learn about many artists.

'Dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match 'one of my'. Also, 'go to the library' is likely incorrect contextually; 'gallery' fits better. The sentence needs 'is to' before the verb phrase for correct structure (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26).

× So I think one of my dream go to the library and learn about many artists.

✓ So I think one of my dreams is to go to the gallery and learn about many artists.

'Go to the library' is likely incorrect; 'go to the gallery' fits the context better. Also, 'learn about many artists' is correct usage (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11).

× Yes, I wanna learn about art because something interested and you need to be intelligent to understand what our meanings on it.

✓ Yes, I want to learn about art because it is interesting and you need to be intelligent to understand its meanings.

'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is correct. 'Something interested' should be 'it is interesting'. 'Our meanings on it' should be 'its meanings' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 4).

× Yes, I wanna learn about art because something interested and you need to be intelligent to understand what our meanings on it.

✓ Yes, I want to learn about art because it is interesting and you need to be intelligent to understand its meanings.

'Meanings on it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted and 'its' is the correct possessive pronoun (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11).

× So you need to discover the paintings on understand what our meaning and the story because the story is so deep and you need be.

✓ So you need to discover the paintings and understand their meaning and the story because the story is very deep and you need to be.

'Our meaning' should be 'their meaning' to refer to the paintings. 'On understand' is incorrect; 'and understand' is correct. 'You need be' should be 'you need to be' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12).

× So you need to discover the paintings on understand what our meaning and the story because the story is so deep and you need be.

✓ So you need to discover the paintings and understand their meaning and the story because the story is very deep and you need to be patient.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'and' between verbs and completing the last phrase improves structure and meaning (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26).

× Yes, I learned drawing from my mom.

✓ Yes, I learned to draw from my mom.

'Learned drawing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learned to draw' because 'learn' is followed by the infinitive when referring to acquiring a skill (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5).

× She was drawing and I learned from her.

✓ She used to draw and I learned from her.

'Was drawing' implies continuous action at a specific time; 'used to draw' better expresses habitual past action (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5).

× And after this I find myself interested and I love drawing, so I keep going on it.

✓ After that, I found myself interested and I loved drawing, so I kept going with it.

Tense consistency requires past tense 'found', 'loved', and 'kept' to match the past context. 'Keep going on it' should be 'kept going with it' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26).