Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and has some grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, be more specific and concise in your description.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like drawing. When I was a child, I often drew pictures of carpenters or characters from comics like Dragon Ball and soccer-themed comics.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Please focus on clear sentence structure and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific about the gallery and your experience.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries, especially in Roppongi, which is famous for its large art galleries. Many young Japanese people, including myself, often visit these galleries to appreciate art.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too short and unclear. Avoid filler words like 'so' and 'yeah'. Use correct expressions and provide more details about why you want to learn more about art and how you plan to do it.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to learn more about art. If I have enough free time, I would like to read art books at the gallery to deepen my understanding.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases like 'art wrestle'. Use correct vocabulary and avoid repeating the same information. Provide clear and specific details about your art learning experience.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to draw and paint, especially during junior high school where I took art classes.

× Yes, I like drawing. So when I was a child I often draw a picture using, you know, career or Carpenter.

✓ Yes, I like drawing. So when I was a child I often drew pictures using, you know, a career or carpenter.

The verb 'draw' should be in the past tense 'drew' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'. Also, 'a picture' should be plural 'pictures' to reflect repeated action. 'Career or Carpenter' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'a career or carpenter' if referring to professions, but context suggests 'carpenter' as a noun, so 'a carpenter' is appropriate.

× So especially I like the try to draw a comic character like Dragon Ball or any other soccer comic.

✓ So especially I like to try to draw comic characters like those in Dragon Ball or other soccer comics.

The phrase 'like Dragon Ball or any other soccer comic' needs clarification and correct preposition use. 'Try to draw' is correct, but 'the try' is incorrect. Also, 'comic character' should be plural 'comic characters' to generalize. 'Like those in Dragon Ball' clarifies the example.

× Yes, I like to go to the gallery in my country through especially Roppongi.

✓ Yes, I like to go to galleries in my country, especially in Roppongi.

The preposition 'through' is incorrect here; 'especially in Roppongi' is the correct phrase to indicate location. Also, 'gallery' should be plural 'galleries' to generalize.

× This is a famous or one of famous place have big gallery.

✓ This is a famous place, or one of the famous places that has a big gallery.

The sentence structure is incorrect. It needs articles 'a' and 'the' properly placed, and the verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'place'. Also, 'one of famous place' should be 'one of the famous places'.

× So I'm supposed to young Japanese people trying to go to the this library.

✓ So, young Japanese people are supposed to try to go to this gallery.

The original sentence is unclear and has pronoun and article errors. 'I'm supposed to young Japanese people' is incorrect; it should be 'young Japanese people are supposed to'. 'Trying to go to the this library' is incorrect; 'try to go to this gallery' is appropriate. 'Library' is likely a mistake for 'gallery'.

× So if I have enough time to run it, I'd like to try to read art books at Gary.

✓ So if I have enough time, I'd like to try to read art books at the gallery.

The phrase 'to run it' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Gary' is likely a misspelling of 'gallery'. The modal verb 'would like to' is correctly used here to express desire.

× Yes, I learned how to draw, how to paint art, especially in my junior high school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to draw and how to paint, especially in my junior high school.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'how to paint art' is awkward; 'how to paint' is sufficient. The past tense 'learned' matches the past time frame.

× In my junior high school, I have I had art wrestle.

✓ In my junior high school, I had art classes.

The phrase 'I have I had' is incorrect and redundant. 'Art wrestle' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'art classes' is the correct term. The past tense 'had' is appropriate.