Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences clearer. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. For example, instead of 'I've made many at peace for my home,' say 'I've made many pieces of art for my home, mostly drawings of nature and animals.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy drawing because it helps me relax and express my creativity during my leisure time. I have created many pieces of art for my home, mostly drawings of nature and animals.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I have loved drawing since my childhood, so I enjoy visiting art galleries where I can see many art pieces and get inspiration to redesign them at home.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I really love going to art galleries. I have loved drawing since my childhood, so I enjoy visiting galleries where I can see many art pieces and get inspiration to redesign them at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and repetition. Use correct tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say 'Yes, I definitely want to learn more about art because I can discover new techniques when I visit art galleries regularly.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to learn more about art because I can discover new techniques when I visit art galleries regularly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Use complete sentences and clarify your ideas. For example, say 'Yes, my school offered drawing classes, and I have been drawing since childhood. I have participated in many competitions and won medals and certificates.'

Ejemplo: Yes, my school offered drawing classes, and I have been drawing since childhood. I have participated in many competitions and won medals and certificates.

× I prefer doing it and I've made many at peace for my home.

✓ I prefer doing it and I've made many pieces for my home.

The phrase 'at peace' is incorrect here; it should be 'pieces' to refer to artworks. Also, 'prefer doing it' is correct as 'prefer' can be followed by a gerund. The error is due to incorrect word choice, not grammar form.

× The drawing of nature or animals.

✓ I like drawing nature or animals.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject. To correct, add subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× Since my childhood I. Love drawing and I like to visit there because I can see many art pieces there and I can redesign it at home.

✓ Since my childhood, I have loved drawing and I like to visit there because I can see many art pieces and redesign them at home.

The original sentence has a misplaced period and awkward phrasing. 'I. Love' should be 'I have loved'. Also, 'redesign it' should be 'redesign them' to agree with plural 'art pieces'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I will definitely learn more about art becauses.

✓ Yes, I will definitely learn more about art because.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. This is a spelling error affecting modal verb usage context.

× I know many techniques how to design and I learn a new techniques when I visit art gallery's and I usually visit there and I learn new techniques from there.

✓ I know many techniques for design and I learn new techniques when I visit art galleries; I usually visit there and learn new techniques.

'A new techniques' is incorrect because 'techniques' is plural; it should be 'new techniques'. Also, 'art gallery's' is incorrect possessive; it should be plural 'art galleries'. The sentence is corrected for quantifier and plural form usage.

× Yes, my school has offered me at class and since childhood I am drawing.

✓ Yes, my school offered me a class and since childhood I have been drawing.

'Has offered me at class' is incorrect; it should be 'offered me a class'. Also, 'I am drawing' is present continuous, but the context requires present perfect continuous 'I have been drawing' to indicate an action from past to present.

× In fact, I want many at competitions.

✓ In fact, I won many competitions.

'Want many at competitions' is incorrect; likely intended 'won many competitions'. 'Want' is incorrect verb here; 'won' is past tense of 'win' appropriate for competitions.

× And I want medals and certificates.

✓ And I won medals and certificates.

'Want' is present tense meaning desire; context suggests past achievement, so 'won' is correct past tense verb.