Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your reply: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid run-on sentences and correct small grammar errors (e.g. verb forms and articles). Try to keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often remember my dreams when I wake up. For example, I usually tell my best friend about strange dreams and ask her to interpret them because I find them intriguing and sometimes feel they hint at the future.

Sugerencia: This answer is already clear and coherent. To improve further, add a brief linking phrase and one specific example to make it more vivid and slightly more complex vocabulary (e.g. "interpretations" → "symbolic interpretations"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often share my dreams with my best friends because I'm curious about their meaning. For instance, last week we discussed a recurring dream about being late for an exam and we explored symbolic interpretations, which helped me understand my anxiety.

Sugerencia: The response is relevant but can be improved by adding a reason and using a linking word. Avoid repetition ("weird dreams" and "images and visions" are similar). Provide one specific reason why you believe dreams have meanings.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams often have special meanings, particularly unusual ones, because they can reflect hidden emotions. For example, when I have a strange dream I ask my friend to help interpret it so I can better understand what I am feeling.

Sugerencia: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and one supporting reason with a linking word. Correct small grammatical mistakes (e.g. "I would like the positive dreams" or "I would like to make positive dreams come true"). Keep it to two sentences and be specific about an example of a positive dream.

Ejemplo: Not all dreams — I don't want the strange or frightening ones to come true. However, I would like positive dreams about my future to come true because they reflect my hopes and ambitions, such as becoming a teacher or starting my own business.

× I often remember my dreams when I wake up I go directly to my best friend to tell her about the dreams I had because I always asked for explanation about them because they are almost weird and strange so I believe they are having that glimpse of the future and.

✓ I often remember my dreams when I wake up, and I go directly to my best friend to tell her about the dreams I had because I always ask her for an explanation; they are often weird and strange, so I believe they give a glimpse of the future.

This long sentence has multiple structure problems: missing coordinating conjunction or punctuation between clauses, incorrect verb tenses and forms (asked -> ask), incorrect pronoun/object (asked for explanation -> ask her for an explanation), unnecessary words (are having that glimpse -> give a glimpse). Fix by splitting clauses with commas/ conjunctions, using present simple 'ask' to match habitual action, and using 'give a glimpse' for correct verb usage and meaning. Use punctuation to separate ideas and a semicolon to connect related independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Talking about them is fun and sometimes help me to understand my thoughts better.

✓ Talking about them is fun and sometimes helps me to understand my thoughts better.

Subject-verb agreement: the singular subject 'Talking about them' (a gerund phrase) requires the verb 'helps' in third person singular. 'Help' is the base form and is incorrect here. Change to 'helps' to match the subject. Grammar problem type ID:2

× They are often very strange, so we like to discuss possible interpretations.

✓ They are often very strange, so we like to discuss possible interpretations.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and matches the habitual meaning, so no correction is needed. Included for completeness. Grammar problem type ID:6

× When I have weird dreams, I usually ask my best friend to help interpret the images and visions I saw.

✓ When I have weird dreams, I usually ask my best friend to help interpret the images and visions I see.

Tense consistency: the clause begins with a present-tense conditional 'When I have weird dreams' and 'usually ask' (present). The relative action should use present tense 'see' rather than past 'saw' to maintain consistency for habitual or current experiences. Change 'saw' to 'see'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Not all of my dreams, some are weird so I don't want those to come true, but I would like to the positive dreams that show what I might become in the future because they reveal my hopes and hidden ambitions.

✓ Not all of my dreams should come true; some are weird, so I don't want those to come true, but I would like the positive dreams that show what I might become in the future to come true because they reveal my hopes and hidden ambitions.

Several issues: sentence fragments and missing verb in the first clause ('Not all of my dreams' needs completion), incorrect article usage 'like to the positive dreams' should be 'like the positive dreams ... to come true' or 'would like the positive dreams to come true'. Also punctuation and clarity: use semicolon or separate sentences, and place the infinitive 'to come true' after the noun phrase. Revised to supply the missing verbs and fix article placement. Grammar problem type ID:22