Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ejemplo: I usually don't remember my dreams. However, if a dream is very vivid or shocking, I tend to remember it the next day.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, fix grammar and be specific about when and why you share dreams. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I share my dreams with close friends, especially when the dream involves them or feels meaningful. For example, if I dream about a friend moving abroad, I tell them because it made me worried.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and explain your reason with clearer vocabulary and structure. Use linking words (because, since, therefore) and provide a brief example to support your view.

Ejemplo: I don't think dreams have special meanings because they often reflect things I saw or thought about during the day. For instance, if I study hard, I sometimes dream about exams, which seems more like memory processing than a hidden message.

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear statement, then add a specific example of a dream you want to achieve and why. Use one linking word to connect idea and example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make some of my dreams come true, especially career goals. For example, I hope to become a software engineer, so I study programming and take online courses to achieve that.

× Now normally I don't re really remember what kind of dreams that I had before but if that's the dream that really really mind blowing then I might remember the dream.

✓ Now normally I don't really remember what kind of dreams I had before, but if a dream was really mind-blowing, then I might remember it.

The sentence has present simple and past references. 'don't re really' is typo and should be 'don't really'. 'what kind of dreams that I had before' contains unnecessary 'that' after 'dreams' and mixes tenses; use 'what kind of dreams I had before'. 'that's the dream that really really mind blowing' is ungrammatical: use past 'was' and adjective 'mind-blowing' with a hyphen; reduce repetition. Use pronoun 'it' to avoid repeating 'the dream'. Improve by keeping present simple for usual habit and past for specific remembered dream.

× Sometimes I share my dreams with the others, especially if I had a dreams with the one that related to my dreams, so I might share it with them as well to let them know what happened in my dream.

✓ Sometimes I share my dreams with others, especially if I had a dream that is related to someone else's, so I might tell them about it to let them know what happened.

Errors: 'the others' should be 'others'; article and plural errors: 'had a dreams' should be 'had a dream'; 'with the one that related to my dreams' is unclear and incorrect pronoun/relative clause—use 'that is related to someone else's'. Repetition 'my dreams' awkward; 'share it with them' better as 'tell them about it'. Maintain tense consistency (past for a specific dream) and clearer pronoun reference.

× I don't think so because for me dreams is like something that we memorize or we impress too much during our daily life activities.

✓ I don't think so because, for me, dreams are like things we remember or impressions from our daily activities.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: 'dreams is' should be 'dreams are'. 'something that we memorize' is unnatural; use 'things we remember' or 'memories' and 'we impress too much' is incorrect—'impress' is transitive; intended meaning is 'leave a strong impression' or 'are impressions'. Simplify to 'impressions from our daily activities' for clarity and grammaticality.

× Yes, if that that is a kind of dream that I want to achieve or I want to get in the future, then of course I wish it comes through.

✓ Yes. If it is the kind of dream I want to achieve in the future, then of course I hope it comes true.

Redundant 'that that' removes clarity. 'a kind of dream that I want to achieve or I want to get' is wordy and unidiomatic; use 'the kind of dream I want to achieve'. 'wish it comes through' is incorrect collocation and tense: use 'hope it comes true' or 'hope it will come true'. Also split into shorter sentences for clarity.